Travel Tales of Bhutan: Thangkas

These hand-painted Buddhist wall hangings are never signed. The identity of the painter is not important: it is an act of reverence and meditation.

This is the thangka I brought back from Bhutan: Padmasambhava seated on lotus blossoms. Shown here as the Precious Teacher, in his left hand he holds a skull cup, in his right, a vajra – the thunderbolt symbol of Tantric Buddhism. On the staff, balanced in the crook of his arm, a vase contains the nectar of life, and at the top, flames symbolise divine wisdom that destroys ignorance.

Padmasambhava is easy to recognise because he is always painted wearing the same hat, usually with the lappets turned up as they are here

Other thangkas depict Buddha, revered Lamas, scenes from Buddhist mythology, or mandalas – geometric designs illustrating religious ideas of the cosmos and the interrelatedness of all beings. Although images follow strict rules laid down by tradition, painting a thangka requires great artistic skill and deep religious understanding. Most monks learn the art as part of their religious training in Buddhist iconography, but only the most adept specialise in painting.

Thangkas are everywhere in Bhutan – in homes, shops and hotels as well as in public buildings and monasteries – and usually accompanied by the evocative aroma of burning Juniper, symbol of life and health. Thangkas are not merely decorative but are used for instruction, for meditation, and to invoke the deities they represent.

Usually applied to a base of cotton, sometimes silk, the paints are derived from plants and minerals – ground up rock and sediments – using ancient knowledge and techniques.

 Rocks, weathered, compressed, veined or otherwise created by geological forces over eons, produce different colours with varying properties to stay ‘true’ when used. Herbal extracts are added as natural glues and ‘fixers’ to make a water-soluble and workable consistency and a durable pigment. Monasteries have thangkas that are centuries old and still vivid.

Painted thangkas are often small, about 20 cm (8 inches) wide, and few are wider than 45 – 60 cm because that is a common width of hand-looms on which the cotton base is woven. But when images are appliquéd and embroidered onto silk panels, the thangkas can be huge. These are the thondrols – silk wall hangings that can entirely cover the courtyard wall of a dzong (a fortified monastery) and may be more than 30 metres wide.

Thondrols are displayed during the tsechu – the Buddhist festivals held each year on an auspicious date in dzongs and monasteries all over Bhutan. The deities witness the dances of tsechu and bless those who perform and attend.

At Tashichhodzong, in Thimphu, I was fortunate to see about fifty monks working on a thondrol; because they were a bit behind schedule they worked at a feverish pace. The thondrol covered the floor of the Tshogdu – the huge chamber in the dzong where the National Assembly meets when in session.

The Lama supervising the work allowed me to take photographs. The light was dim – monks who were hand-sewing sat by the windows – but you get the impression of the frenetic activity that was taking place.

 

One monk holds a pencil drawing of a bird, transferring the design onto fabric by pricking the outline with a needle, then rubbing fine powder into the prick marks which leave a trace on the fabric beneath.

Others are embroidering motifs on pieces of silk with the deft delicacy of Victorian ladies. Two large sections are being carefully sewn together by another group, and in a corner, a plump, middle-aged monk, his face nearly as red as his robes, races a treadle sewing machine as if his life depends on it. It rattles and whirrs without pause, his eyes focused on the needle, the tip of his tongue protruding between his lips in concentration.”

 Excerpt from: Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, an e-book travelogue published by Collca in their illustrated BiteSize Travel series. More information and quick access to a range of e-retailers here: http://collca.com/jib

 

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Travel Tales of Bhutan: the Flying Tiger

Bhutan has tigers in its southern jungle. You might even see one if you visit a wildlife park there, but this tiger is legendary.

The great 8th century Guru, Padmasambhava, is said to have brought Tantric Buddhism to Bhutan, travelling there on the back of a flying tiger. Padmasambhava, also known as Guru Rinpoche (‘Precious Teacher’) is a Bodhisattva:  an Enlightened One who could be in a state of Nirvana, enduring no further rebirths, but who voluntarily undergoes further reincarnations to help others also achieve Enlightenment.

The flying tiger brought him to the narrow ledge in a cliff, 3,000 feet above a gorge – the present site of Taktsang Monastery, whose name means ‘Tiger’s Den’, or ‘Tiger’s Nest’. According to the legend, Padmasambhava first lived in a cave nearby, teaching his followers from the sacred scripts he brought with him. There are still many caves and tiny hermitages in the side of the mountain.

Like all myths and legends, this story contains important truths. To some Buddhist sects, Padmasambhava is a second Buddha. His name in Sanskrit means ‘Lotus Born’, which some interpret as a miraculous birth, but ancient written records show that Padmasambhava was an Indian scholar studying at the Buddhist University at Nalanda.

In the year 757 AD, the King of Tibet invited Padmasambhava to bring his Buddhist teachings to Tibet, which he did, founding the famous Samye monastery there 20 years later. In those days, migrants and traders travelled frequently between Tibet and what is now Western Bhutan, bringing their language and customs with them. It is quite possible that Padmasambhava made that journey before written records of him cease in 804 AD. And I like to think the ‘flying tiger’ was the passion of his vocation.

 

We are climbing up the mountain that adjoins the sheer cliff on which Taktsang is built. All the way up we have had distant views of the monastery: white specks way above us that appear to hover in mid air in swirls of morning mist – a hallucination rather than a destination, it looks impossible to reach.”

Excerpt from: Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, an e-book travelogue published by Collca in their illustrated BiteSize Travel series. More information and access to a range of e-retailers are here: http://collca.com/jib

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Travel Tales of Bhutan: Love the Boots!

Could you walk past these boots? Shopping in Thimphu, Bhutan’s capital, I could not resist them.

It wasn’t my fault. I was egged on by the approving smiles and nods of local men and women in the shop. When the assistant behind the counter wrapped them lovingly and seemed almost reluctant to part with them, I knew I’d made the right choice.

"Bhutanese boots"Such boots are not suitable for slithering down rocky paths or scrambling through high mountain passes; they are worn on formal and festive occasions and usually by men. But I don’t see why men should have the best footwear, so I wore them with traditional Bhutanese dress a couple of years ago for the opening of my solo photographic exhibition ‘Other Places: Other Faces’. Held during a northern New Zealand summer, it was 28C in the shade and I sweltered inside folds of hand-woven wool cloth, but one has to suffer for one’s art.

 

Traditional dress for Bhutanese women, the kira, is a length of fabric (about 2 metres), folded and wrapped around the body from the shoulders to the ankles, held in place at each shoulder with a korma – a set of silver, hooked brooches joined by a chain. A cotton or silk blouse is worn underneath.

Fabrics for the kira are usually woven from cotton or wool for everyday wear, and in brightly coloured silks for special occasions. The many different designs and colours are each characteristic of a particular district in Bhutan. Although men share household tasks – including cooking and sewing – it is the women who weave, making a significant contribution to household income.

The kira is gripped around the waist by a woven belt (kera) embroidered in gorgeously vibrant colours.

 

 

A short, silk jacket (toego), usually in plain vivid colours, is worn, loose, over the top. I chose emerald green, with a lovely medallion motif.

 

Folding and fastening the kira is a complicated business, starting with the fabric held behind you. I had to ask Tsering, the receptionist at the hotel in Thimphu, to teach me how to do it.

You can read more about Bhutan in the new ebook travelogue, Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, published by Collca in their illustrated BiteSize Travel series.  Amazon UK http://amzn.to/IacIDz   Amazon US http://amzn.to/J6lJ3D   Or access other e-retail sites such as iBooks, WHSmith, Barnes and Noble,  from Collca’s website here  http://collca.com/jib

 

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Happy Birthday Dear Blog

It’s a year since I joined Twitter and started my tree house website. My friend still loves to remind me of our conversation – one of many in the same vein – shortly before this event, “Trish, you need broadband, it’s much faster.” “Nonsense, I don’t need that internet stuff, hardly ever use the thing.”

The worm not only turned, it spun on its tail.

Blogging has gone hand in hand with Tweeting, so I’ll begin there. Starting with two followers, and following nine, Twitter seemed a sedate place. I remember, after much agonising thought, bravely putting up my first tweet – fortunately I can’t remember what it was – and the fearful excitement of seeing it on the screen for ‘everyone’ to see (failing to realise it would be seen only by my two followers). I went off to make a celebratory cup of tea to calm my nerves. When I returned, my tweet was gone – betrayed! It was found later, of course, by scrolling down, but I’d learnt the ephemeral nature of Twitter. Now, it is more a torrent than a stream.

It’s been a wonderful year: I’ve made real friends, useful connections, learnt a huge amount from links and tweets, have nearly 2,000 Tweeps – real ones, no bots – and follow about the same number.

Those first two followers have had a successful year, too, and I celebrate them here as a ‘thank you’ for their support and encouragement of a rooky.

The first is Lorraine Mace, (@lomace), author, writing tutor and ‘critiquer extraordinaire’.Her critique service and Flash 500 competitions have ballooned in the last twelve months, becoming a truly international affair, and she added a new humorous verse competition which is proving equally popular.

 

But the biggest drum roll is for the publication of Lorraine’s first crime novel, Bad Moon Rising, published by Crooked {Cat} Publishing under the pseudonym Frances di Plino (@FrancesdiPlino). This is a gripping psychological thriller, written with all the literary flare and technique that Lorraine has at her fingertips and shares so readily in her wonderful critiques. I can tell you, she is an excellent editor, too.

 

My second follower was The Writers College, (@Writerscollege), tweeted by the principal Nichola Meyer. The college operates in South Africa, New Zealand and the UK, with published and award-winning course tutors.

In the last twelve months, student enrolment in New Zealnad has doubled, and judging from the college newsletter, their students are getting published and winning prizes. One of the reasons might be Nichola’s innovative approach to keeping up with new markets: new courses in the last year included ‘Scriptwriting for Games and Online Video’. During the year, Nichola invited me to write a series of posts for the college blog; one of them, ‘Flash Writing’ was later included in the study notes for their new flash writing course.

(Links for both Flash 500 and The Writers College are on my blog roll, on the right.)

So, if you are followed on Twitter by someone with only two followers, and they look halfway human, please give them a leg up and follow them back; it could lead to a mutually productive relationship.

I want to celebrate new Tweeps, too, but how to do that without making a huge list, or leaving out lovely people?

My solution is to mention just one, who will represent all the wonderful Tweeps I chat to and exchange links with each day. That iconic Tweep is George Allen, (@thewhitespike), a delightful Scotsman. He is a good representative: kind and generous, responsive, endlessly encouraging, interested in everything and everyone, he follows a wide range of fascinating Tweeps, and he has a blog that shares his personal journey – learning about Shakespeare. It worries him that he struggles so hard to write his posts; he has yet to realise how much all writers struggle – keep at it George.

It was from following Twitter links that I learnt about blogging.

I read everything I could find, and the more I read, the more formidable the task looked: it was going to be a full-time job. That could not be. So I asked myself four questions:

Q. What is my focus?

A. I am a writer. OK. Be a writer who shares her thoughts, experiences and work on her blog, not a full-blown blogger with all the networking and frenetic posting that involves.

Q. What commitment can I make, consistently, regularly?

A. With a little more discipline, weekly: often enough to generate interest and to give me rhythm.

Q. Received wisdom says I should become known for one subject, so what will I post about?

A. That’s not me: my interests are wide; my mind is a rag-bag of things I like to relate. OK. Make it like a magazine, articles, short stories, pictures.

Q. What is my goal for identifying topics, and writing posts?

A. I want to entertain and inform, while promoting my writing and my books. Then the posts must be good quality: imagine writing for the grittiest, grumpiest editor, like [Deleted! Ed.]

Here I am, 56 posts later and only you can judge whether I have done a good enough job, but I am enjoying it and that is important, too.

 Finally, my own big achievement during the past twelve months.

Masks of the MoryonsThrough Twitter and blogging I met my ideal publisher, Mike Hyman from Collca, (@collca). My proposal for an ebook about spectacular Easter rituals – the Moryonan – in the small town of Mogpog in the Philippines, became the first title in a new series of BiteSize Travel books: Masks of the Moryons: Easter Week in Mogpog. More information at http://collca.com/motm

 

"Journey in Bhutan"On 20 April, Collca published my second ebook for the series: Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, a much longer book but an absolute joy to write, re-living the amazing experience of being in Bhutan. More information at http://collca.com/jib

 

In preparation for the next title, I am now ploughing through 500+ pages of single spaced, badly typed journal entries made during five years living in Papua New Guinea.

 Whoever their publishers are, all writers have to promote their work these days.

It can feel awkward, embarrassing, but I’ve learnt three important lessons in the process that I will share with you:

 * be creative in blogging and tweeting about our books,

* give something of value to those who read our posts and tweets, and

* build relationships and promote the work of others in the spirit of reciprocity.

Guest blogging is hard work but it achieves all three. A big thank you to the author friends listed here, who invited me to appear on their blogs:

Terre Britton (@terrebritton) on her blog Creative Flux – an article: How I Survived Inside a Crocodile http://ow.ly/atFY5

Morgen Bailey (@morgenwriteruk), an “author spotlight” on Morgen Bailey’s Writing Blog – http://wp.me/p18Ztn-2AF

Jane Isaac (@JaneIsaacAuthor) on her blog Caffeine’s Not a crime – “author interview”, Author Interview: Meet Trish Nicholson

Gabrielle Kimm (@gabrielle_kimm) on her sumptious Renaissance website – “author interview” http://gabriellekimm.co.uk/2012/05/13/interview-with-trish-nicholson/

Lorraine Mace (@lomace) on her blog  http://thewritersabcchecklist.blogspot.com/2012/05/writing-life-experiences.html?spref=tw   – an article: Writing Personal Experience

And thank you to the on-line travel community GotSaga Travel (@GotSaga) for inviting me to post an article on their website: 10 Wonderful Things to do and see in Bhutan http://ow.ly/at021

I had to celebrate my blog birthday this week, but next week I’ll post more Bhutan pictures and chat – promise.

 

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Journey in Bhutan

Published today! The ebook that was such a joy to write, I was sad to finish it.

Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon is published by Collca in their BiteSize Travel series. But it is quite a big bite: 43,000 words, and contains 37 of my original colour photographs. It was so hard to choose which ones to include, but I will share others with you here, in weekly posts about Bhutan.

And as this is the Year of the Dragon, it is a very auspicious time to read about Bhutan!

The Bhutanese call their country Druk Yul – Land of the Thunder Dragon.

Why ‘Thunder Dragon’?

About a thousand years ago, several different schools of Buddhism developed in Tibet, but the most significant was the Drukpa Kagyupa sect. Its founder, Tsangpo Gyare, who had already established the prestigious Ralung Monastery in Tibet, was travelling from Lhasa to a place called Nam, when he had a vision. Nine dragons flew into the air roaring like thunder while white petals floated to the ground. He took it as an auspicious sign and established his Dharma – his centre of learning – in that spot. He named his sect after the Tibetan word for ‘dragon’ – druk.

The Drukpa sect was later brought to Bhutan by Buddhists fleeing religious persecution. The most important of these was Ngawang Namgyel who established fortified monasteries – dzongs – and was the first to unify Bhutan, becoming the Shabdrung, the Supreme Leader. The Drukpa Kagyupa became the dominant sect; his followers became known as the Drukpa, and their country, they named Druk-Yul – Land of the Thunder Dragon, now a Kingdom.

Here are a couple of excerpts from Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon

A visit to the ruined Drugyel Dzong (a fortified monastery and administrative centre), built in 1647 at the head of the Paro Valley to protect Bhutan’s western border with Tibet.

Standing in this quiet spot, listening to birds singing and leaves crinkling in the breeze, it is hard to imagine these hillsides echoing with the thunderous clatter of war horses and the deadly whisper of arrows, but since at least the seventh century, various Tibetan war-lords and rulers have tried to expand their influence into the favoured valleys of Bhutan. Over the same period, waves of refugees from cycles of political chaos in Tibet have migrated and settled here.

From my journal, on the third day of our trek, written at the top of a hill overlooking our campsite near the base of Mount Jhomolhari:

Our blue tents nestle below like a patch of gentians in the scree, faded slightly in weakening sunlight. Streams meander back and forth across the valley floor mimicking the silver traces of a snail. In this high, exposed spot the wind is terrific. The prayer flag cracks out its mantras in a staccato chant – half worn away with its piety, its role to calm the unpredictable earth spirits.

I hope you enjoyed these excerpts. I’ll share more with you about Bhutan here over the next few weeks.

Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon is available from Amazon UK   http://amzn.to/IacIDz   and Amazon USA http://amzn.to/J6lJ3D and will be available from over 80 popular e-retail outlets for a range of devices. You can read the preface, and access other e-retail outlets as they become available, on my publisher’s page here: http://collca.com/jib

 

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Himalayan Faces

A face to remember: the north-east face of Chomolungma (Mount Everest) – the Tibetan side, a photograph taken from the East Rongbuk Glacier.

 But the faces I have in mind are those of people. 

 

 

 

 

These are my companions on that trek up East Rongbuk. Returning from reaching 20,000 feet (6,154 metres) on the flanks of Everest, we look very pleased with ourselves (I’m grinning on the right), but in this post, I’d like to share with you some memorable faces of local people met during various other Himalayan treks.

 

Ajita, one of the camp crew on the trek around the Annapurna Circuit in Nepal, is preparing our evening meal. One of the problems in this part of the Himalayas is deforestation, which results in erosion, and devastating floods in lower valleys. Ajit was extremely careful with firewood; keeping the fire burning only as long as necessary, dousing the flames and saving the wood for the next meal. We supported her efforts: refusing offers of hot water for washing, and putting on extra clothes rather than expect a fire in the evenings.

 

To me, he is the Soothsayer. I don’t know his name, we passed him on the track and he may in fact be a public scribe, an educated man who reads and writes letters for those who cannot do so for themselves. But those books at his feet look intriguing, perhaps they are for divining auspicious days – there is certainly something of the sage about him.

 

In Kathmandu there are so many fascinating faces, it is best simply to sit on the dusty steps of a temple and watch them go by.  That is how I met this young boy with the red tika mark on his forehead. When I asked his name, he said proudly, “My nem two nem. Mitra Pramesh.” It was the Hindu festival of Holi: all the youngsters were throwing water bombs and handfuls of coloured powder at each other. When a water bomb landed on me, I put my camera away and gestured that they should share with me some of their water bombs and powder. They did, and soon conceded, amid shrieks of laughter, that I was just as good a shot as they.

 

I find this photograph particularly poignant: a young woman wearing Tibetan dress, a western jacket…and a Chinese cap. She was one of a crew of labourers working on the new road to Lhasa; breaking rocks by hand, loading them onto mule carts, and when these were tipped up to cascade their loads onto the ground in clouds of dust, ramming them into place to form the foundations.

 

Driving across the Tibetan plateau – in an old Bedford truck carrying spare parts and driven by a Tibetan who knew how to fit them – one of the outposts we stopped at was Gyantse.  It seemed to be full of goats, dogs and children; the latter, as fascinated by us as we were by them. The older boy was especially interested in my camera, and was delighted by the magic of looking through the lens while I zoomed distant buildings towards him. When you think about it, photography is pretty magical!

 

In a family’s house nearby, the fuel for their cooking stove is stored on the wall: pats of animal dung and straw pressed onto the surface to dry. Sun-burnt and wind-dried faces, marks of survival in one of the world’s most unforgiving environments, bear the smiles of traditional Himalayan welcome. In a strange irony, it seems that the harsher the conditions and the less people have, the friendlier the hospitality.

 

It may be cheating a bit to include this face, but this is Fred, the dzo (a cross between yak and domestic cattle) who carried my bag and tent with great care from the crumbling monastery at East Rongbuk, to our campsite at 18,000 feet. I wouldn’t have been able to do it without him. Fred’s bell still hangs on my study wall, while the pair of jeans I traded for it have probably worn out by now.

 

Faces at a window. The carved window frames have faded, but those in the shop below, in a street in Thimphu, Bhutan’s capital, are still brightly painted with traditional symbols in vivid colours. Not solely for the pleasure of beauty, but to bring good fortune and avert evil spirits.

In my next post, there will be more photographs of this beguiling Buddhist Kingdom hidden deep in the Himalayas. But I have kept the best pictures for my new travel book, Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, released by Collca on 20 April.

Update: And now it is out and available at Amazon UK:  http://amzn.to/IacIDz  and Amazon USA:  http://amzn.to/J6lJ3D and will be available at over 80 e-retail outlets worldwide. You can read the preface, and access other outlets as they become available, on my publisher’s page here: http://collca.com/jib

 

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How to Make Writing Competitions Work for You

You know that sinking feeling just below the diaphragm when the competition entry you groomed to perfection fails to bring home the prize-money?

 Then you read the winning story and secretly think yours is better?  You may be right: selection is a subjective process and a different judge might have chosen your story. But these thoughts only rub salt into lacerated pride. A judge may still choose your story if you enter another competition, but there is more to gain from writing competitions than winning. I went through quite a lot of salt learning that so I’m sharing it with you.

Go for the feedback

Choose competitions that offer optional critiques because these will further develop your talent. You have to pay extra but they can be excellent value, cheaper than regular critiquing services and the feedback is straight from the source. Watch out for the ones that only offer a tick list:  they are less helpful. But even a sentence can give you a vital clue to future success. I learnt that titles for stories are important through an informal scribble from a judge. Up to then it had been the last thing I added and I’d never given much thought to it.

Go for the anthologies

Not only big international competitions but also many regional or writing-group based contests publish anthologies of the top 10 or 20 entries as well as the winners. Some pay a small fee for inclusion in the anthology (if you didn’t win prize money), others may only give free copies, but it can lead to that first publication. Look for small independent publishers who regularly produce anthologies based on writing contests – these are a promising way to get your nib in the door. Check though, that these competitions tell you who is judging, specify prize money and closing dates, and have a reasonable entry fee; sometimes ‘free competitions’ with no details are simply a trawl-net for free copy which the organisers can then sell.

If you are part of a writing group, why not suggest the group publish its own anthology? Everything is now possible with electronic publishing and print-on-demand.

Smile if your story is short listed

It is easier to win or to have an entry short listed in local competitions, but be bold, have a go at the big ones. To be short listed in a major contest is significant recognition and worth putting in your bio. The judge’s final choice is unavoidably subjective but a story that is short listed is capable of winning. For the really big competitions it’s a morale booster to be on the long list: say your story was in a long list of 40; if there were 800 entries, as a percentage your story would be in the top …  um …  well, an encouraging result. We should celebrate short listings and long listings, it means we are facing in the right direction, and can polish a bit more before sending it off to a different judge: it could win next time.

Grab Attention for the Right Reasons

Trying to catch the judge’s eye with pink paper, even if it is hand-made and incorporates African elephant dung, will only attract the attention of those in charge of the waste paper basket – it will be disqualified. The first thing a reader sees on your entry is the title – that’s what needs to be spectacular. It must relate to the content in some way, but should be intriguing, perhaps an unexpected or unique combination of words, a metaphor, a question. We should be reading lots of short stories anyway, and paying special attention to their titles, but as you’ve read this far, I’ll share with you my short cut for title-think:

I go to the web site www.flash500.com , on the left panel I click ‘winning stories’. They publish the first three and I usually read those, but if you keep scrolling down you come to the short list of 25 titles, followed by 40 or more, long listed titles. Look through these, notice which ones draw your eye and work out why. You don’t know what the stories are about of course, but it can tune your mind in to a useful train of thought. And there are new lists to play with every quarter.

Strive for Originality

I prefer open-themed competitions, but those with specified themes can be a stimulus to creativity, may even jolt you out of writers’ block. Note, though that a couple of hundred other competitors are all working to the same theme: enough to send any judge into a vegetative state. To ensure your entry is original, list as least ten ideas around the theme. Ignore those and write four more. Cross these out. Make a large pot of tea, and the next idea to emerge is probably the best one to use.

And remember, originality does not mean making your own rules – follow the guidelines and avoid getting your story binned.

A positive approach to competitions is a bit like marathon running: it helps you keep in training and the challenge of the race brings out that extra sparkle you didn’t know you had.

Good luck with your entries!

Note: I wrote a related post a year ago, My Six Favourite Writing Competitions, which I have added to ‘recent posts’ on the right in case you wish to read it. It was written originally for the NZ Writers College website.

 

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Fairy Tale

Fairy tales

“Once upon a time, there was a beautiful princess.”

“And she had long, golden hair, didn’t she, Daddy?”

“Yes, Suzi, she did.” They know every detail, Suzi and Amy, it’s their favourite bedtime story. Mine too.

“Like my hair. It’s not very long yet, but it’s growing.”

“More story, Daddy.” Amy, the three-and-a-half-year-old, doesn’t like interruptions to the telling, unlike Suzi who loves to put in the finer points, new ones each time. She’s just started school and become very wise; Amy sometimes feels a little oppressed by her own lack of status – only at play group.

“Every day, the princess put on a lovely satin dress of the brightest … ”

“Blue.” Says Suzi. It was, “Red-like-my-shoes,” last night.

“All right, the brightest blue, and went into her garden to feed the two white doves that were her special friends. She would spend all day with her doves among the flowers, and the honey-bees, and the tiny fluttery birds that sang and danced around them. Then one day, the princess plucked a rose from her favourite bush … ”

“A pink rose, Daddy.” Colours fascinate Suzi, just like her mother, perhaps one day she will be an artist, too. She draws well. The kitchen walls are covered in her daily offerings, we’ll need to expand into the living room soon. Amy is more into music and dancing. They use music a lot in her pre-school group. Sometimes they ask me to play the guitar there. I give them short classical pieces and I’m astonished by their wide-eyed enchantment.

“Go non, Daddy.” Amy is drowsy already.

“But the stem of the rose had a sharp thorn that pricked her finger, and she fell into a deep swoon. Nobody could wake her: not the honey-bees, not the birds, not the little white doves, not even the gardener who looked after all the flowers.”

“And the magician comes,” Suzi whispers. Sometimes it’s a wizard. Once it was a gnome – I think that was inspired by a project she did at school that day.

“Yes, and the magician said, ‘There is only one thing to do. I must take her to the grand palace beyond the sun.’ So they laid the princess on a palanquin studded with jewels, and mounted it on a magnificent white horse with gleaming silver harness, and they rode away beyond the clouds, beyond the sky, beyond the sun.”

Amy is asleep. Suzi is struggling to keep her eyes half open.

“Daddy?”

“Yes, darling?”

“The sunbeams …”

“Of course. Well, the princess was so sad to leave her special friends, she sent sunbeams down for the two little doves because she loved them very much” – and the gardener too.  “Time to sleep now, Poppet.”

“Ni-nigh, Daddy.”

“Night-night, darling.” I kiss them and leave the door ajar; they like some light from the landing.

Fairy tales. But how else could we bear to share our grief?

 

 

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Write Behind the Wheel

Write Behind the Wheel

 Ferrari or Ford fiesta, the inside of a moving vehicle offers special opportunities for a writer.

Yellow truck PNGI’m not suggesting you actually write while driving: I have as much vested interest in the safety of other drivers as the next person. It’s more a matter of making the most of the opportunity whether as passenger or driver.

A moving vehicle is a detached and private world: no-one can walk in on your conversation and you can’t stomp out and slam the door. The intensity of an encounter can increase by this enclosure in a moving capsule – seclusion felt variously as liberating, protective, intimate, threatening, or imprisoning. And it often results in change.

In limbo

I feel conscious of a certain privileged situation in time and space in a moving vehicle; the limitations on my actions seem, temporarily, to suspend both. Social anthropologists call this a liminal state (in limbo): neither here nor there; an in-between status, suspended from the main flow of events. This may become exasperatingly vivid in a rush hour traffic snarl-up.

 Most cultures recognise these transitional states as special and often dangerous, requiring ritual to ensure a person’s safe passage through the social no-mans-land, and a return to normality in a new role. Initiation into manhood, weddings, and funerals are all rites of passage that include elements of seclusion or liminal states before people take up new roles as adults, in-laws, or widows.

The other interesting aspect is the limited eye contact between driver and passenger – well, one hopes so or the outcome could be dramatic and the change in status terminal. The point is, people often open-up, talk about what’s on their minds – almost talk to themselves – when there’s not much else to do and they have a captive audience with limited eye contact.

As a writer, I use these opportunities in three ways:

Driver-listener

I have a friend who talks non-stop whenever she is a passenger in my car. Whether this is an indication of how nervous my driving makes her, or whether she simply needs the occasion to off-load, I’m not sure. Either way I learn a huge amount about human nature, family life and local gossip. I do miss bits, tuning out for a moment to negotiate traffic but I usually pick them up the second time around.

Passenger-talker

It depends who is driving, but sometimes I can ramble aloud and productively through ideas for my WIP, uninhibited by rays of boredom from the eyes of my listener, or the risk of interruption as a critical thought emerges. It is much better than talking to one-self. Sometimes it even keeps the driver amused.

 Writer-observer

In the back seat you have a third person point of view appreciating interaction between driver and front seat passenger – especially with judicious use of the driver’s mirror.

A vehicle scene can increase pressure on characters: by their proximity, fear (either of the driver’s ability, crazy traffic, or the situation), tension because of delay or destination, or more obviously in car chase or abduction scenes. All of these can show new aspects of character or highlight unexpected traits.

The in limbo status is particularly useful and a wonderful opportunity for dialogue. A normally reticent character can become garrulous. Under the liberating influence of limbo, a character may say things that delight, anger or horrify the listener. Exchanges may reveal to a character, aspects of herself that she was not aware of.

I have to remind myself, though, not to leave the readers in limbo: to recall for them subtly from time to time that we are in a moving vehicle, otherwise they can experience a nasty shock of disbelief when we hit the kerb at the next corner.

How do you make use of in limbo situations in your writing?

 

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Versatile Blogger Awards

The Versatile Blogger Award – Woo Hoo!

Confession: There is an official logo for the Versatile Blogger Award but I could find no way to make it paste onto this post.  I have posted a lovely New Zealand fern instead and hope everyone will forgive my techi-inadequacies :)

Many thanks to Mo Northam, www.abcwriterschecklist.co.uk  for passing the baton to me for The Versatile Blogger Award – a truly wonderful surprise that came to me, like all good things seem to, early on a Monday morning!

But it seems there is a price to be paid: I have to reveal 7 seven things about myself that you probably don’t know. Well, as you already know about my technical skills….

Here are 7 revealing things about myself (I hope no psychologists are reading this) :

  • I like to establish routines for everything I do so I have the fun of breaking them

 

  • Some years ago, I walked…well, staggered to 20,000ft on the northern flanks of Chomolungma (Mount Everest) and realised it was the other 8,000ft that was the real challenge (this also applies to my writing!)

 

  • Unlike most of my relatives, I can’t draw or paint and found this frustrating until I discovered photography: it’s not the same but for me it’s a do-able alternative

 

  • I possess only one handbag measuring 25x15x13 cm and containing 17 items – it avoids scrabbling through a bigger mess for things that aren’t there

 

  • I like my toast well done to within 5 seconds of the smoke alarm. I can recommend this: it develops quick reflexes

 

  • My favourite souvenirs are decorated eggs: carved wood, stone, glass, feathers, painted, mosaic….nice to hold and easy to transport

 

  • I have a passion for Gaudi – more accurately his art and architecture. Why?…I don’t know, not everything can be explained J

And now, I have the pleasure of passing the baton of the Versatile Blogger Award to others. Here are some Blogs I enjoy exploring. They each have something different and interesting to offer.

Jacqueline Pye  http://www.jacpye.com

Rachel Carter  http://rachelcarter.me

David Sharp  http://www.aweeadventure.co.uk

Daisy Hickman  http://sunnyroomstudio.net

Anne Stormont  http://annestormont.wordpress.com

Oscar Windsor-Smith  http://oscarwindsor-smith.blogshot.com

Explore and enjoy! J

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Group Act 1: DIY Writers Workshop

Group Act 1: DIY Writers Workshop

Part 1 of 2

 I would be lost without my writing buddies. Even in our small community there are five of us who found each other through contacts at the local library. We each write in different styles and have our own ambitions but our monthly lunch date helps share the angst of finding the right words and keeping up momentum. In between, we celebrate, commiserate, or critique via email. But we wanted more, so we decided to create one-day workshops for ourselves, each taking a turn to do some homework to share with the others.

I drew the short straw to go first; this is what we did:

Aim of the workshop

To find a process for structuring our stories that we can adapt to our individual styles. We looked at opening lines and paragraphs, the spiral of conflict in the middle, and endings.

Resources

For my homework I used Sol Stein: Stein on Writing; Robert McKee: Story; and 20 Great Opening Lines to Inspire the Start of your Story, from Daily Writing Tips (info@dailywritingtips.com). I wrote handouts outlining the main points for the workshop so we could spend our time talking about them rather than have our heads down scribbling notes.

In preparation we all read and brought with us a copy of Maupassant’s The Necklace, to give us a common example to discuss, and we each brought one of our own stories to work on during the practical sessions (more relevant than ‘exercises’).

Method

We alternated between theory and practise, and shared the reasons for any revisions we made to our own stories during the day.

The Workshop

Generating a new story idea to work on during the workshop

We started with a bit of fun. I’d brought a “Fiction Square” that Paula Williams features in the Writers Forum magazine each week: you roll a dice and use the numbers to identify the elements of a story – characters, conflict, setting etc. After much rattling of dice and giggling, we spent a few minutes making rough notes on a possible plot for our story ideas. After each bit of theory we discussed during the day, we returned to this story idea, and/or our own stories we’d brought with us, to make any changes or notes for revision that occurred to us.

Openings

Stein identifies three goals for an opening paragraph:

  1. 1.       To excite curiosity, preferably about a character or situation
  2. 2.       To introduce a setting, something visual – even one word – to engage the reader
  3. 3.       To lend resonance to the story – something ‘clicks’ in the reader’s mind

He gives a memorable example from Earthly Power by Anthony Burgess: “It was the afternoon of my eighty-first birthday, and I was in bed with my catamite when Ali announced the archbishop had come to see me.”

Sometimes one line is enough: “I wanted to strangle mother but I’d have to touch her to do that.”

This introduces strong conflict and emotion, an unusual threat or omen (the reader wants to know ‘Why?’ and ‘Did she do it?’), a domestic setting is implied, and there are two threats of action that help define the character through her obvious hate and disgust.

Longer paragraphs are fine provided they contain the above elements but the first line becomes critical.

Stein tells us that conflict, or strong emotion, is the most important element to intrigue a reader instantly. Another one is to have your protagonist naked!

I tried this in a short story; the opening line began: “Standing naked at the window, the dark hair of his belly coiled flat with moisture, he stropped his damp shoulders with a coarse towel…”

No, it wasn’t a romance, no steamy love scenes, but it led into what he was watching (the threat) and why he was drying himself (his situation) – two events I needed to reveal at the beginning of the story. And maybe Stein has something because this story was a finalist in a recent competition.

 Next week, in Part 2, I’ll share with you what we learnt from McKee about the spiral of conflict, core values, determining the Central Idea of a story, and the summary we came up with for plotting a new story or revising existing ones.

 Oh and the theme for the new photo in the Gallery this week is…Openings

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                          

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Group Act 2:DIY Writers Workshop

The second of two parts

Last week, I explained how my writing group set up its own workshop, and the first part of our session on openings for stories. (If you missed it, you can scroll down, it’s below this post). This week I explain what we learned from McKee’s, Story, about what goes in the middle.

We don’t want rules to follow: we’re looking for a process to help us say what we want to say, in the way we want to say it. For most of us, this doesn’t come without some study. In McKee’s words: “Yes, you can write a story without studying the theory – even a good one – but to write consistently good stories, you must learn the craft.”

As we talked, laughed and scribbled our way through the afternoon, these are the main points from McKee that we found most useful.

Conflict

The best plots derive from characters gaining or losing something of critical importance to them (sometimes more than once) – this is their conflict. We reminded ourselves that conflict can be psychological (within the character’s mind); with other individuals (spouses, siblings); with society (legal or economic injustices for example), or with the environment (the challenge of a mountain, an earthquake).

The most common causes of conflict are money, love and power, but the stakes must be high enough to allow for emotional intensity and a build up of tension, or why should the reader care.

Core human values

High-stake conflicts arise from core human values i.e. qualities of human experience that can change from positive to negative, from one moment to the next. For example, love/hate, hope/despair  justice/injustice, strength/weakness. They are expressed in pairs of opposites because stories are about the swings from one to the other brought about by characters’ actions.

The action of the story (what happens to the character and what he or she does about it) is the cause of this swing or change in the core value – e.g. from love to hate or vice versa.

The Central Idea

The core value + the cause of change = the Central Idea of the Story. McKee describes this as the root meaning or statement about an aspect of human experience around which the story revolves.  For example, love may turn to hate through jealousy; hope to despair through a character’s weakness.

Every story has a Central Idea that:

  • Holds the story together, gives it consistency, force and purpose
  • Keeps actions relevant (a reader assumes every word in a story to be significant)
  • Holds the readers’ attention and allows deeper meaning to emerge

If we write down this Central Idea in one sentence, we can ensure that character and action support it and are woven tightly around it. The single sentence describes in what way (core value) and why (cause) the character’s life changes from one condition at the beginning of the story, to another at the end. It describes the arc of the story.

For a crime story for example, the Central Idea might be: “Justice is restored because the protagonist is smarter than the criminal.”

For the story to be convincing, the protagonist would ultimately win through brain power and forensics rather than by wielding a gun or a karate chop to the back of the neck – the character of Sherlock Holmes rather than Rambo.

Character through Plot

The plot is the writer’s choice of events to achieve the story arc and Central Idea. Character is revealed by events – actions, thoughts, dialogue – that change something (or set up change) for the character and his achievement of the core value. They may bring him closer, or make it more difficult for him to get what he wants.

Each time a character has to respond to a new pressure, an additional layer of character is revealed to the reader – sometimes to the character herself. These should be new insights into character, not repetition of traits already seen, and they may be contradictory and complex.

Each event creates a change for the character, either towards success (positive), or failure (negative). Tension is created by the pressure increasing with each change – the stakes getting higher – and by alternating the positive with the negative.

The Climax

The end of the story arc can be positive (happy), or negative (tragic), or ambivalent (the protagonist finds her biological mother but is disgusted by her; a character wreaks revenge but at huge personal cost), but there has to be some sort of climax that dramatises the story’s Central Idea.

We found identifying the Central Idea, and writing it in one sentence, the most difficult part. But afterwards, someone said, “Yes, I’ve got the central idea down, it’s what I was really trying to say, but my story isn’t saying that…I’m going to write another story that does.” We all made revisions to our stories that day. And we came up with the following summary.

A Process for plotting and/or revising stories

(1-4 are not necessarily in this order or in single steps, but they need to be known before 5-8)

  1. Identify your main character/protagonist
  2. Identify his/her conflict/s
  3. Write down the story’s central idea
  4. Decide on events (including antagonists and/or subplot) that will create pressures for the character (not all antagonists are human e.g. traffic, mechanical failure)
  5. Determine sequence of events to give alternating positive/negative results for the character
  6. Check that both positive and negative forces are strong (struggle, not a walk-over)
  7. This might be the stage to decide which point of view reveals the story best
  8. Review the story arc – does it flow and focus around the Central Idea
  9. Does the ending reflect previous events, create a climax of ultimate change, logically fit with the Central Idea, and satisfy the promised arc?

To all of this we add – in our unique voice:

  • Rich characterisation
  • Visual language and metaphor
  • Sub-plots and settings
  • Meaningful dialogue

You won’t be surprised to learn that we have decided we need a follow-up session on this topic, aimed at revising stories that have been languishing in a dark draw.

Sorry this is rather a long post; I thought it easier to follow in one big mouthful even though the chewing may take a while. I hope you have found something useful in it somewhere. And if you’ve already tried these ideas, I’d love to hear from you.

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Treats for Writers

Writing can be a highly pressured occupation: if it’s not deadlines, it’s trying to grab an hour at the key board amid demands of domestic imperatives – especially if they are home from school. I am familiar with other people’s stress because as well as being a writer, I am a relaxation therapist – almost an act of self preservation, really.

 Part of my role is to provide therapeutic balms for my clients. I make them myself, blending clinical quality essential oils with organic base-oils, and thickening with beeswax.

Some of these oils can be particularly helpful in a writer’s lifestyle, so I thought I would share a few tips with you.

Rosemary oil, from Rosmarinus officinalis, is an energising oil and especially good for boosting brainpower, concentration, and memory. The Greek philosophers associated rosemary with Apollo; a solar deity who also presided over poetry, music and philosophy. I put a few drops on a tissue and inhale from time to time to kick-start the grey cells on sluggish mornings. And on sunny days, I pop out to the garden between writing tasks for a quick sniff of my three metre rosemary hedge. An essential oil is highly concentrated and much more potent though, and you should avoid rosemary essential oil if you are pregnant, breastfeeding, or suffer from epilepsy.

Lavender oil is well known for its analgesic and soothing qualities. Of the several varieties of lavender plants, the most therapeutic is Lavandula angustifolia, also known as L.vera, true or English lavender (other varieties are used more for their fragrance). When sleep won’t come – characters roaming my mind looking to swop plots, to-do lists forming behind my eyelids – a few drops of lavender oil on the pillow help me to relax and sleep better. A smudge of lavender oil on the temples or back of the neck relieves a headache (lavender is the only essential oil that is safe to use directly on the skin in small quantities), and a few drops in the bath are sheer heaven.

Here is a delicious way to relieve exhaustion, or to sooth aching limbs:

Switch the phone off. Fill the bath to a comfortably warm temperature (if it’s too hot, the oils will evaporate too quickly). Immediately before stepping into the water, add 1 drop of camomile oil, 2 drops of geranium oil, and 2 drops of lavender oil. Swish the water around gently, immerse yourself and enjoy! Dry off gently to leave traces of oil on your skin for longer. (Don’t be tempted to use more drops: the benefit is in the dilution and balance).

If you’ve had something to celebrate lately, here’s how to relieve the hang-over:  

Fill the bath with comfortably warm water. Add 1 drop of fennel oil, 2 drops of juniper berry oil, and 1 drop of rosemary oil. Swish the water gently, immerse yourself and swear to drink less next time. (Avoid fennel oil if pregnant, breastfeeding, or the skin is highly sensitive or damaged).

And my particular favourite, to revive tired, aching feet:

Put sufficient warm water in a foot bath or large enough bowl – not the washing-up bowl, please – to cover your feet without flooding the floor. Before putting your feet in, add 2 drops of juniper berry oil, 2 drops of lavender oil, and 2 drops of rosemary oil. Stir the water and put both feet in - sigh.

If there is space under your desk, you can soak your feet while you write – it could have an amazing effect on your prose – but you need to plan this before putting your feet into the water…

Safe use of essential oils:

Essential oils are extracted from living plants; they are an amazing gift from nature for our wellbeing but they are potent and should be used with respect: never use more drops than recommended on the bottle. If using essential oils for massage, always dilute with vegetable base-oils as directed on the bottle before applying directly onto the skin. Use only pure essential oils – not synthetic substitutes.

 To retain their therapeutic qualities, store them tightly sealed in a cool place and, most important, out of the reach of children. Good brands provide a tamper-proof screw cap and a dispenser inside the neck of the bottle that releases one drop at a time. This allows for accurate measuring and is also an extra safety measure against inquisitive little fingers.

 This post does not include medical advice. If you have health issues, consult a health practitioner before trying therapeutic products new to you.

We all appreciate a little TLC – what other writer-care tips can you share?

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Give Me a Cue

Today is June 10, historically not a bad date – it saw the birth of Sir Terence Rattigan, Saul Bellow, Maurice Sendak, Frederick Loewe, and Judy Garland, among others. And on this day in 1829, ‘Hooray Henrys’ first yelled their allegiance from Henley Bridge during the inaugural Oxford and Cambridge boat race. And in case you are wondering – Oxford won. True, it was also the day Margaret Thatcher won her second term as British Prime Minister in 1983 but then, who voted her in?

An old family friend – long since gone to a better place – was, at one time, Personal Assistant to Toscanini, and I was fascinated to learn that on June 10, 1931, Toscanini and his wife were finally allowed to leave Italy after his passport had been confiscated because he refused to conduct the Fascist anthem at a concert. He later protested against the Nazis too by refusing to conduct at the 1933 Bayreuth Wagner Festival.

We each have our favourite sources of writing cues, whether we write fiction,  or non-fiction, and one of mine is The Wordsworth Book of Days, edited by Gerald Masters, from which I gleaned the tit-bits above.

For fiction writers, the events described for each day are a wondrous source of original plot ideas, or of those specific tiny details that give a story authenticity and resonance. Turning to May 17 for example, romantics might like the interment – in Paris in 1163 – of Héloïse, the secret wife of Abelard; he had died twenty years earlier but was exhumed and reburied to lie next to her. Or this for social historians: half the city of Cardiff was sold-off by The Marquess of Bute in 1938 for the whacking sum of £20m; in the sale were theatres, shops and whole villages, including some 20,000 houses – so how did that affect everyone? And no doubt a humorist could make something of the fact that Charlie Chaplin’s coffin appeared on this day ten miles from the Swiss cemetery from which it had been stolen a couple of months earlier – where the hell had it been?

Freelance writers for magazines are usually penning articles and features for publication four to six months ahead; the Book of Days can give a heads-up on more unusual topics and anniversaries. Let’s take November 5: instead of all those boring articles about Guy Fawkes, we could write about the fireworks after Rudolph Valentino married actress Jean Ackerman and was locked out on his wedding night. The marriage lasted less than six hours; can any modern celebrity beat that record?  But maybe we should keep that story as an antidote to St Valentine’s Day. On a different tack, November 5 was also the birthday of Art Garfunkel, and of Roy Rogers who later became a cento-millionaire; unaccountably it gives no biographical details for the real star performer: his horse, Trigger.

Or, you could write about the frog…

 

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Three Little Stories

I love writing flash fiction, as I’ve said elsewhere on several occasions. These three tiny flash stories were entered a while ago in a local competition for stories of exactly 100 words (excluding the title). An exact word count is always a bit more of a challenge; these three were not placed but I thought them entertaining enough to share with fellow flash enthusiasts.

The Window-seat

Tracy moved in on Tuesday. She came from a high-rise. The semis on this estate are nicer; no damp, no ghetto blasters overhead, even a tiny garden. She was lucky. But people can look into your front windows from across the street. She isn’t used to that: it unnerves her.

     “That sticky-beak in number nine is always sitting at her window,” she grumbles, and keeps her curtains closed. To avoid the nosy old biddy she goes out the back, walks down the evil-smelling alley.

Number nine steps cautiously out of her house and along the path, tapping her white cane.

 

Lover in Paradise

A jade sea caresses the shore, leaving wet kisses on hot, white sand. Sunlight glances off palm fronds that bend to whisper secrets to their neighbours.

     She inhales deeply the sweet, spicy air and sees a handsome young man, his naked torso gleaming like coffee icing, approaching her with a garland of flowers. The breeze carries their erotic fragrance. She recognises it as frangipani – her favourite. As she walks towards him, slowly, seductively, she hears the faint hum of a bee…no, a distant plane? It gets louder, much louder.

     Aargh! She judders awake. Bloody Arthur is snoring again.

 

Last Train

He sits at our table.

His tee shirt is a holey relic imprinted with a month’s doss house soups. Lifting it casually, revealing white flab spattered with red, angry lumps – courtesy of spiteful fleas – he begins rhythmically, meditatively, to scratch. His unfocused gaze hovers on the far wall of the crowded station cafe.

“Let’s move,” you hiss.

“There’s still an hour,” I say.

We’re starting over: going on a second honeymoon – to Torquay.

“You’re always so obtuse.” I feel your saliva spatter my face.

You get the Brighton train.

I queue for another coffee.

He nods. Passes the sugar.

[I have had to turn the 'comments' off temporarily because I'm getting long gobbley-gook spam several times a day, but you can always Tweet me a message if you wish - I'd like that.]

 

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Birthday Card

He lay in the road where an unseeing-tram had knocked him down. He wasn’t looking where he was going, his mind intent elsewhere this old tramp in carpet slippers shuffling towards the church.

People stepped around him until a compassionate passerby took him to the charity hospital where Nuns tutted over trousers fastened with safety pins, and nursed him for two days before friends discovered and identified him. Antoni Gaudi died a few days later at the age of 74.

At his funeral, Barcelona honoured him as the genius he was; now it preserves his international heritage and sells the tee-shirts. This is the man who put a tiny lizard on a decorated chimney pot in Palau Grὔell,

and created, in the Sagrada Familia, a church that breaths light and air as it inhales the energy of the cosmos or, if you are devout as Gaudi was, the Grace of God.

Today, June 25, is Gaudi’sbirthday and I am in the Catalonian town of Reus where he was born, in 1852, into a family of metalwork artisans. Few have remembered his birthday: it is fiesta today in Reus but for the feast day of Sant Jordi (aka St.George – he of the dragon), who is the patron saint of Reus and of special significance to all Catalonia. But there are no banners for Gaudi, so I am writing this birthday card for him.

Near the simple house where he grew up, there is a small sculpture of Gaudi as an adolescent, a boy in deep thought.

There are none of his buildings in Reus, though; it was prosperous enough in the nineteenth century – spoken of in the same breath as Paris and London – but its wealthy industrialists did not choose one of their own to design their status symbols.

Instead, there is now a Gaudi Centre which does homage to his originality and genius with interactive displays and audio-visual aids that are appropriately innovative and creative; it is a state-of-the-art exhibition that Gaudi would have enjoyed – not for personal aggrandisement, that was not his style, but for its ingenuity and artistry. It shows vividly how Gaudi observed and applied nature’s own engineering to the spaces he designed; experimented with form to provide new functions, and achieved all of this with imagination and originality still unsurpassed.

Happy Birthday, Gaudi!

 

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Providence: here to help you

I used to have a scruffy, tea-stained piece of paper pinned to the wall over my desk: my mantra. It rescued me when I returned to the UK after years of working overseas to find myself jobless, homeless, stateless, but not yet shiftless – in fact, to survive I had to become remarkably shifty.

Later, this tatty piece of paper got me through all the hoops and mangles and bureaucratic tangles of emigration to New Zealand – and then I lost it during the move.

A quotation from Goethe, the gist of it was: whatever you can dream, you can do. Once you make a first commitment, Providence will put out all kinds of unexpected ways and agents to assist you. (If anybody knows the full quote or can direct me to the source I will be eternally grateful: I will even follow them on Twitter).

The key to this mantra is the first step which starts, not with the dream itself, but with the conscious recognition that as far as you are concerned – regardless of emigration requirements, other people’s views, or the laws of gravity – you could do it. And then you engage with Providence in whatever form suits you – Google key words, flick through Yellow Pages, ask a question….

You know what happens when you do something you think is truly original – you have your car sprayed bright yellow with a purple bonnet for example – and suddenly you see them everywhere, everyone is driving bright yellow cars with purple bonnets, they’re in the parking lot at Tesco’s, advertised in the Exchange and Mart, in the next movie you see. They were always there, of course, but until you took that commitment to do it, you didn’t notice.

This happened when I said to myself, I could write another book. It had been years and a couple of careers since my last non-fiction book and it felt like a previous lifetime – someone else’s lifetime in fact. When I spoke it out loud, my writing buddy said, “You must do it.”

It happened while I was writing some guest blogs for an on-line writing college. One of these articles gave me particular pleasure to write and I thought: This would make a great book. And I went that one step further: I could write it. So I held onto the article, did more research, worked on a sample chapter.

And then, while looking for something else on the Net, I came by chance upon an academic with a personal interest in my topic. I emailed this complete stranger, whom I saw already as an ally, to ask if he would read my first chapter. “Yes, pleased to. Send it over.” There are some truly lovely people inhabiting the ether.

Since then, all sorts of resources and ideas that had been scudding around unnoticed in the chaos of my study, became visible and useable.

And now, during this year’s Winchester Writers’ Conference which is coming to an end today, other ‘unexpected ways and agents’ are happening to assist me realise my dream but I won’t tempt fate by writing about them yet. I will tell you another time.

Some people call it self-belief, but it’s more than that: you have to step out of your inner world for Providence to meet you half way, and when she does, it helps to ’know where your towel is’.

Do you have a Providential story to share?

 

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Research:spiralling into control

All writers need to do research at some point whether we’re creating alternate worlds, historical dramas, or the complex psychology of characters.Details matter, and if our work is as widely read as we hope, you can be sure some vigilant reader will pick up on our slips. Don’t, for example, have your heroine tripping over a mole hill as she flees from a heart-breaking encounter in the drawing room into the solace of her misty Irish garden. No moles in Ireland. Our friend the mole, Talpa europaea, common in Britain and throughout Europe, swims well – paddling with its front paws – but not across the Irish Sea.

For non-fiction where references and citations are required, research becomes critical along with cross referencing and meticulous recording of data and sources. I’m in the thick of this at the moment with my current non-fiction project. It’s a while since I embarked on a book length ms so I’ve been re-learning the hard way.

With great excitement – because this is a labour of love – I wrote down the theme of the book in one succinct paragraph, smiled smugly and swanned off to brew a pot of tea. On my returned, I read it over again and realised this beautiful paragraph was outlining the contents of the book rather than stating what the book was about. It wouldn’t do. Back to the drawing board, I set out to refine what I’d written into one sentence –the core theme that was beyond any of the content but would be reflected in all of it. Some considerable time later…I knew I’d ‘got it’ when the sentence I’d written raised all sorts of questions like: How? Why? When? – I’d found the lead into my chapter outlines.

But before I’d gone very far into the chapter outlines, I was stumped by the need for a detailed time-line to guide me through the chronology and key events. The outlines were put aside for a while and I worked on constructing the time-line, alternating with searches to check-out specific details and the sources I would need to return to later. I enjoyed the searching so much – everything leads to something else and it’s all so fascinating – it was quite a while before a little voice in my head said: You seem to be having far too much fun; how much of this do you really need?

Pink with guilt I reread the theme-statement, and returned to working on chapter outlines; only to discover I needed more detail on the time-line to finalise chapter sequences, and they showed that I neeeded more searches and reading to beef-up the chapter contents. At this stage frustration set in and I felt I was going round in circles. It took a day of savaging weeds in the garden before it dawned on me: not circles, spirals. The iterative process between structure, content and research was actually spiralling my project forward; each turn of the spiral led me nearer to a workable plan from which to launch my writing.

It seems to be working. I have now written two chapters; they required a couple of mini spirals in the process, but I’ve learnt the value of rotating between time-line, chapter outlines and research, to ensure I am spiralling into control.

So, why are there no moles in Ireland? I don’t know, because the other thing I’ve learnt the hard way is to know when to stop. Research can become addictive, everything is immensely intriguing, especially the footnotes and asides that lead into yet other factual highways, but if I don’t discipline my searching, I’ll drown in data before I reach the keyboard to write.

 

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Notes from Winchester Writers’ Conference: Part 1

Are writers’ conferences worth the time and effort to attend? Over the years many conferences have drawn me into their orbit; I’ve even organised a few, but Winchester was my first writers’ conference and I didn’t know what to expect.

 I had made a bit more effort than most – travelling around the planet from New Zealand – which heightens expectations, but I wasn’t disappointed. In particular, as the days progressed I was struck by the ‘big heartedness’ of delegates who celebrated others’ successes and empathised with those who felt they had failed. And the staff and volunteers who kept the huge machinery going to occupy and entertain over 400 creative and varied minds were endlessly encouraging and constructive.

 What you get out of these events is in proportion to what you put into them; for those who had some idea of what they wanted to achieve, the atmosphere was charged with a positive energy that was hard to resist: we were pretty exhausted by Sunday lunchtime.

With such a wide range of workshops and lectures to choose from, inevitably some choices turned out to be better than others. Attending two days of workshops before the weekend, my conference was a four-day affair and this is the gist of my experience on the first two days.

Thursday 30th June: Peopling the Landscape

Deposited by the bus on the main Southampton road, I was directed to a stile at the roadside and a quaint but pleasant walk through a field to the village of Shawford, and a village hall that any community would be proud of. A substantial building: while locals gyrated to aerobic dance music on the ground floor we were unaware of their presence in our upper room, gathered around author Judith Allnatt for her session on writing memorable characters.

 Showing vivid characters is of obvious value to writers of fiction, but in non-fiction too we must find ways to make the people we feature come alive as distinctive individuals with their own histories. We moved from visual imagery and metaphor for physical description, to using actions and settings to portray personality and character. What and how they eat, where and how they sleep, what items hang over their chair, sit on their table; vivid details of their room or habitual surroundings and how they respond to them can show us who they are, and varying the tempo of our writing can  emphasise character and enable prediction of behaviour.

It was a very practical session and I am not good at writing on demand but I had a go. As a result a possible new character emerged for my WIP: spontaneity and the pressure of the moment can be a fruitful experience. One exercise, in pairs, was to ask questions of the character and to answer as if we were that person – imagining ourselves in their place. My character, an old woman, was a seventeenth century itinerant and quite unconsciously I found myself replying in some kind of ancient rural dialect – I was beginning to hear as well as to see my new character, however imperfectly.

Friday 1st July. Still at Shawford Hall. From Inspiration to publication

Author and broadcaster Jake Wallis Simons shared his experience of finding agents and dealing with publishers. He also gave us feedback on our own fears, hopes, assumptions and expectations about submitting our work.

Some of his personal tips for constructing that nerve-wracking and make-or-break covering letter to an agent are:

  •  Keep it brief – one page.
  • If there is any connection, however tenuous (you met at a conference? A mutual acquaintance suggested them?), or previous communication, refer to it; place yourself on ‘the inside’ – a prospective client to be taken seriously.
  • Indicate an author who is similar in the genre you are submitting – one of their authors of course, having done homework on their lists and clients.
  • Say why you think they would be interested in your book – its unique selling point in relation to the sort of titles they handle, and why you are the best person to write it.
  • Give a word-count, and some small quirk that will distinguish you from everyone else – perhaps you collect umbrellas and if you’re as lucky as Jake, so will the agent.

A synopsis should also be brief, giving the bare bones of the story and the broad movement of the plot rather than details of characters. A well written review can be a good example for a one-page synopsis.

Friday evening in the main campus: An Insider’s Guide – What to Submit and How

Cressida Downing, editorial consultant to agents, publishers and authors, took the place of Jo Herbert for the Friday evening topic I had chosen, and her session was an ideal follow-on from the daytime workshop, including professional advice about researching agents, what to include in covering letters, and how to construct your writer’s CV. Detailed handouts were given but I’ve picked out a few key items below:

  • Put your name; email address, chapter and page numbers as a header on every page of your submission (I am guilty of not doing this).
  • Address the agent by his or her name (which may not be the same as the agency name) – find it in Writers and Artists Year Book if necessary, and say how you found them/why you think they are the right agent for you – this shows effort and commitment.
  • If your work has received a professional critique, say so – this provides some validation.
  • Specify writing experience – journalism, blogging, competition success, previous publication.
  • Give some quirky detail about yourself that could be useful as future publicity material.
  • Your CV should be brief, include only episodes of your career or experience directly relevant to your submission e.g. showing the expertise or authority from which you are writing.
  • If you are active in social media, give brief details, especially if you know the agent blogs or tweets – part of your agent research.

And my favourite is:

  • Strike a balance between crawling humility and over confidence.

This has become a very long post but there seemed little point in mentioning the sessions without sharing with you some of what I learned. Before the end of the week I will post a Part2 on the other two days –  including Barry Cunningham’s plenary address, my one-to-one appointments with agents, and the writing competitions. See you again soon….

 

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Winchester Writers Conference Part 2

 

Saturday July 2nd

A sunny morning. A change of pace. Cars and taxis zoom into the main campus; bags and people tumble out. Greetings, hugs, and exclamations as new arrivals hustle for their room keys, complete their registration.

Tea, coffee and … chocolate biscuits … have been virtually on-tap the whole time. Mug in hand I rootle through the book stalls and find bargains that will cause my suitcase grief. And by a brilliant stroke of that most exquisite of companions – Providence – I find a book I didn’t know existed but now realise is essential to be aware of before my appointments with agents later in the day. Elsewhere in the book fair, the presence of a dozen self-publishing, indie and print on demand companies is an instructive sign of the times.

Over 400 delegates pack the raked hall in The Stripe building for the official welcome speeches. Barbara Large, the larger than life instigator and director of the Winchester Writers’ Conference (now in its 32nd year) is a walking incitement to write; not only to write, but to succeed. The keynote speaker, Barry Cunningham, ‘discoverer’ of J.K.Rowling and now operating his own publishing company, Chicken House, fulfils our high expectations of wit and wisdom on the publishing scene. And guest speaker Geoff Holt’s description of how he sailed across the Atlantic, and published his account of it, despite the disadvantage of his paraplegia and limited use of his arms, is both moving and inspiring. I believe a video of the plenary talks will be available at some point on the conference website at www.writersconference.co.uk  

During the day, a choice of 60 lectures by authors, editors, teachers, literary agents, and publishers keeps delegates circling from one venue to the next. The campus becomes a busy beehive: people slip in and out of lectures to attend their one-to-one appointments which run concurrently, exchanging greetings, directions and ‘good luck’ wishes fleetingly en route. We sit in the corridor, a row of expectant apprehensive faces each waiting our turn. Some seek advice on their current work from authors, or editors, others have already pitched work to their chosen agents ahead of the conference as I have, and now wait to hear the response.

The conference volunteers trying to keep 500 appointments on-time seem as eager for our success as we are. Over the years, 100 delegates have had their first publishing break as a result of this conference. I’ve already rehearsed to myself the worst scenario so that I am prepared: what if the agent disregards my written proposal and simply says, “OK, pitch it to me.”

I have waited so long and come so far for this opportunity; fifteen minutes face to face with that most elusive of species – the literary agent. I have three appointments this morning. It is my first submission for this project. I expect nothing: hope for everything.

It is time.

I step into a large room so tightly packed with small tables, each with two occupied chairs, that it is difficult to manoeuvre, but they are all flagged with numbers and I know which direction to head for. The delegate before me rises and leaves. The buzz of talk is deafening. But once I engage the eyes of ‘my’ agent, I am unaware of anyone else in the room. For them it must feel like being eaten alive.

By the end of the morning, two agents have greeted my non-fiction proposal with enthusiasm and asked for sample chapters: “It all depends on the writing now.” The first small step.

I am in a daze, being jostled in front of the foyer notice-board as we all search for our pseudonyms on the competition short-lists. Eighteen competitions: a lot of lists. Some delegates quickly turn and head for the book fair in the next room, giving nothing away. Others, pink-faced, eyes shining, photograph ‘their’ list with mobile phones. Yes, my name is there too.

During lunch – and a free book at each place-setting (the same generosity at all three meals) – we exchange and attempt to interpret the experiences of our morning appointments.

Back in the auditorium, the evening awards ceremony includes adjudicators’ comments on their selected winners – a helpful insight into their expectations and standards. No false modesty here, success is too hard come by – one of my short stories is Highly Commended, my shorter short story wins a first. That is so unexpected in this forum: I am thrilled.

Dinner is even noisier: congratulations, commiserations, explanations all lubricated with wine. Contact details are exchanged across tables, and I discover a couple of Twitter followers – intriguing to meet them as real live and lovely people. Surprised at how few people are using social media, I find myself in the extraordinary position of a new initiate being asked for advice on how to get started.

Those with the stamina go on to participate in the panel discussion and midnight reading.

Sunday July 3rd

Everyone a little more subdued this morning and some faces are missing at breakfast. The last of my chosen workshops is, Mapping the Path to Your Writing Goals, with Victoria Field and a representative from The Writer’s Compass – a wing of NAWE (National Association of Writers in Education) offering free information and advice to writers generally www.nawe.co.uk

I’m not good at introspection in public, even in the friendly, encouraging environment of our small group, but the self-questioning exercises are insightful and will, I think, be helpful to me in the future.

The final lunch, the last free book, the hugs of farewell, good wishes and, for some, arrangements to meet up at a future workshop lead us into reluctant departure.

That was my first writers’ conference. And what about you other 399+ delegates at Winchester – how was it for you?

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Review of His Last Duchess

Last lesson of the school day. In an atmosphere of congealed intelligence most of my class mates appear to be sleeping with their eyes open, or at best their minds are elsewhere, contemplating the freedom of the street after the bell. But my attention is riveted on Miss Fitzsimons, known – sometimes affectionately – as ‘Blue Fits’ on account of her temper and her hair rinse. She is reading to us from Robert Browning, her favourite poet, “That’s my last Duchess painted on the wall … she smiled, no doubt, whene’er I passed her; but who passed without much the same smile? This grew; I gave commands; then all smiles stopped together. There she stands as if alive. Will’t please you rise? We’ll meet the company below, then.” 

I liked people who smiled. I wanted to know the friendly Duchess who rode around her castle on a white mule. And I was disturbed by this polite man’s brutal power to snuff out happiness.

The psychological depth of Browning’s poem was beyond the understanding of my 12-year-old self and the unease remained somewhere in my psyche unresolved – until I read Gabrielle Kimm’s debut novel, His Last Duchess. The author had also been intrigued by this poem but as an undergraduate – an age better able to appreciate its emotional nuances; even so, it was a few years before the idea of the novel came to her, “… like one of those moments in cartoons where a character has a light bulb appear over his head – I just suddenly knew that turning it into a novel was what I had to do.”

The light bulb is apt because Gabrielle Kimm adroitly illuminates not only the complex characters of the manipulative and obsessive Duke of Ferrara, Alfonso d’Este; his vivacious teenage bride, Lucrezia, and the Duke’s long-suffering mistress, Francesca, but a whole slice of Renaissance Italy. Whether it’s a vaulted kitchen steaming with banquet preparations, the blind dignity of a hooded peregrine falcon, the sensuous intricacies of untying a closely fitted sleeve, or grinding and mixing artists’ pigments, we are effortlessly transported to sixteenth-century Tuscany and Ferrara, unconsciously absorbing the lifestyle of her characters.

The symbolism is intriguing: among the items of Lucrezia’s dowry, Alfonso gains the greatest pleasure from a bronze of Hephaistos (Greek god of the forge), his body taught with effort over the anvil while his hammer fashions the shield of Achilles – an instrument of defence powerless to save the virile Achilles from his inherent weakness.

The novel opens with 16-year-old Lucrezia de’Medici romping in the gardens of Villa Cafaggiolo, her family’s Tuscany home, with her cousin Giovanni; an innocent exuberance that anticipates her forthcoming nuptials with apprehension mingled with wonder and excitement. Alfonso is a handsome man; he eyes her with desire. This she must view as a potential bonus because such an alliance between the houses of Medici and d’Este is sought to further the political and economic position of both dynasties: not to satisfy the romantic yearnings of a young girl.

Alfonso d’Este’s obsession with Lucrezia’s beauty and desirability, later transformed in the chaos of his mind into physical aversion, combined with the political necessity of an heir, results in almost manic frustration and the appalling dénouement two years later. To say Alfonso is ‘a difficult man’ is an understatement, yet the depths of character which the author reveals enables us to understand – if not condone – his actions.

As for Lucrezia, a pawn in the politic power-play of both families and oppressed by her irrelevance in the d’Este household, her hopes and lively spirits are ground down to alienation and an unsurprising vulnerability to the promise of forbidden love.

I will say no more about the plot: your coffee will go cold reading this novel and I don’t want to give anything away. Integral to its pace is the balance within its characters; there are no cardboard stereotypes here. Complex psychology is demonstrated in dialogue and actions appropriate to the period (to some extent Alfonso is a product of his time), but they are essentially, deeply human and in that sense are timeless. Among the numerous supporting characters, Giullietta the nurse, Fra Pandolf and Jacomo the portrait painters, and especially Francesca Felizzi, Alfonso’s mistress, are so richly drawn we imagine their lives outside the story.

And Gabrielle Kimm succumbed to her own creation it seems: unable to get Francesca out of her mind she made her the protagonist of a second novel, The Courtesan’s Lover; not a sequel, but the story of Francesca and her twin girls in Napoli forging entirely new lives after the tragic events in Ferrara. It is due out in November 2011 and I am impatient to read it.

In the meantime, you can read an extract from His Last Duchess, and browse the Renaissance gallery on Gabrielle Kimm’s period website www.gabriellekimm.co.uk

Gabrielle Kimm’s, His Last Duchess, is published by Sphere, an imprint of Little, Brown Book Group.

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How to Blend Your Own Body Oils

How to Blend Your Own Body Oils

Be kind to yourself. Aromatic body oils don’t have to be an expensive luxury. You can blend your own.

How to use aromatic body oils:

  • After a shower or bath to condition, moisturise and soften the skin.
  • Massage neck and pulse points (temples, soles of feet, wrists) to relax at bed-time.
  • Massage the aching bits – for writers; hands, wrists and backs especially.
  • Massage into neck and arms to re-invigorate during the writing day.

***** wash your hands before using the keyboard – it doesn’t like oil all over it.

Here’s how to blend your own:

What you will need, and some basic information:

1. A base-oil, also called a carrier-oil, used to dilute the essential oils for application. Always use cold pressedoil (read the label). Organic would be a bonus.

I use a range of base-oils in my clinic because they have different qualities. Apricot kernel, and avocado oils for example are especially good for mature skin. But one good, all-purpose, base-oil is safflower oil: it is light, absorbed quickly, inexpensive, and is not known to cause allergic reaction. If you can’t find safflower, look for sunflower, or grapeseed oils, they are very similar.

One of the benefits of blending your own oils in small quantities is the avoidance of chemical preservatives; if you do make larger quantities and want to be sure it will keep for several months, add 10% jojoba oil to the base oil: it is an anti-oxidant and natural preservative.

2. Essential oils: there are hundreds of essential oils, many of them interchangeable in their effects and combinations. I have described below a range of blends that can be made from a collection of six essential oils: Juniper berry (Juniperus communis); Marjorum French (Origanum marjorana); Rosemary Cineol (Rosmarinus officinalis cineol), Lavender (Lavandula angustifolia), Geranium (Pelargonium graveolens), and Lemon (Citrus limonum).

Always buy certified pure essential oils (not synthetics). You can lower the cost by getting together with friends; each buy a couple and share them as you need them. (There are approximately 200 drops in a 10ml bottle of essential oil).

3. A small glass measuring jug – the recipes below are for 100ml blends. (Glass because it will clean thoroughly: oils may leave traces in plastic).

4. Bottles: some new, clean, 100ml glass bottles with screw caps to store your blends, and labels for them so you know what they are.

The blending method:

Measure out the base-oil first; add the drops of essential oil second. Stir gently and briefly to aid blending (disposable lolly sticks are good for this), and pour into a clean, dry, glass bottle. Screw cap on firmly, and label.

Remember, when reading quantities: with base-oils you are dealing with mls, and essential oils, with dropsdon’t get them mixed up.

Essential oils are potent, never use more than the stated quantities.

The essential oil bottles should have drop-stoppers; some oils are more viscous than others and slow to form drops but do not take out the stopper with impatience or you won’t get the correct measure.

Clean everything you use carefully before mixing a different blend, a citrus-based natural cleaning agent will remove oil effectively.

OK, we’re ready to go – the recipes:

(1)  Wake-up call – for mental energy: To 100 ml of base-oil, add: 24 drops of rosemary, 12 drops of geranium, and 12 drops of lemon.

(2) Skin tonic – or just to feel good all over: To 100 ml of base-oil, add: 8 drops of marjoram, 16 drops of lavender, 12 drops of geranium, and 12 drops of lemon.

(3) For the achey bits – (but don’t apply pressure to inflamed or bruised areas): To 100 ml of base-oil, add: 24 drops of rosemary (or lavender – see safety notes below), 10 drops of marjoram, and 12 drops of juniper berry.

(4) Relaxation – relieve the tension: To 100 of base-oil add: 10 drops of marjoram, 20 drops of lavender, and 20 drops of geranium.

(5) Bedtime – to help you get to sleep: To 100 ml of base-oil add: 24 drops of lavender; 10 drops of marjoram, and 8 drops of lemon.

Tip for sensitive skin:

If you have sensitive skin, test for any skin reaction before using a blend by applying a small quantity behind and just below your ear-lobe. This is one of the most sensitive parts of your skin: if there is any reaction, wash the oil off with cold soapy water (heat will encourage further absorption).

Essential to read – Safety:

  • Avoid rosemary oil if you have high blood pressure, are pregnant, or suffer from epilepsy.
  • All of these blends are for external use only.
  • Keep oils out of reach of children’s inquisitive fingers.
  • Store tightly sealed in the cool, and away from direct light.
  • This post is not giving medical advice. If you have any health issues, see a health practitioner before trying therapies new to you.

What are your favourite treats?

  Comments welcome, and I’ll answer questions if I can.  Enjoy!

 

 

 

 

 

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Mum’s Poems

 Mum’s Poems

Today is the fourth anniversary of my mother’s death. Sylvia Mary Taggart – Ma, to me – born January 7th 1928, died 17th August 2007.

Like many daughters, I didn’t fully appreciate her qualities until I was an adult with my own experience of living. She was easily incensed by cruelty to children or to animals, and wouldn’t hesitate to intervene – on buses, in shops, in the street – if a child was being hit or a too-young puppy being dragged along on a length of string. As a teenager I wanted to melt into the paving stones; as an adult I sometimes had to rescue her before her target’s abusive language became physical harm. All her life she was mad about dogs and made many lasting friendships with other ‘doggie people’. She invested the same degree of generosity and loyalty to a wide circle of friends and acquaintance; whether they were members of the ‘county set’ or ‘bag ladies’ made no difference to Ma as long as they had a dog.

Her other great love was opera. As a girl she was taken to La Scala theatre in Milan, but I don’t think she had another opportunity to go to the theatre until I took her to Verdi’s Nabucco in Brighton for her seventieth birthday. All through my childhood a precious collection of old vinyl records in brown paper covers gathered dust under the bed for want of a machine to play them. But I can see her now at the low, stone sink of our farm-worker’s cottage, porridge-coated pan in one raised hand, scrubber in the other, singing arias from Tosca accompanied by Radio 3. When the batteries ran out she had to sing unaccompanied as we had no electricity, and didn’t always have the bus fare to go into town.

Ma had a beautiful singing voice, though few but I heard it. One of the unspoken regrets in her life was that she’d had no chance to use it. Unfortunately her singing genes passed me by but she inspired in me a love of music that has given me a lifetime’s delight.

Ma enjoyed writing poems. She never kidded herself she was ‘a poet’, she wrote for her own pleasure, musings about all sorts of things she needed to express, but she loved to share her poems with anyone who was interested. Had she known about blogging she would have been thrilled to have her poems here for others to read, so I’ve selected a few to share with you on her behalf. Not for critical acclaim; just in the hope that you might enjoy them.

The artist in this first poem was a dear friend of ours from Scotland.

To An Artist

I can feel the loneliness of snow,

Can look in wonder at the sunset’s glow,

Walk beside the cottage down the glen,

See the woodlands wrapped in mist and rain,

So many pictures, sombre, bright and warm,

Dark clouds now gathered for a storm,

Cascading water falling down a hill

To Lochs between the sands stretched out so still,

All these you give, I love and understand,

Created by an artist’s gentle hand.

                        ______

 Ma wrote this next poem in support of Mental Health Week one year.

Anguish

A blistered heel or a broken foot

Are painful and hurt for a while,

But very soon heal without much fuss

And the tears disappear in a smile.

 

But a broken mind is a fragile thing

And it’s hard to discover the pain.

It’s hard when you lose your bearings

And you can’t find your purpose again.

 

It’s the nightmare of not knowing

How best to cope with the stress,

Or to understand what’s happened to you,

To explain why life seems a mess.

 

When you enter an endless tunnel

With no sign of a light at the end,

You are longing to find a solution

With the help of some caring friend.

 

So dark and deep are the realms of despair

Which engulf you like blackness of night,

Relentlessly robbing your peace of mind

As you desperately search for the light.

 

It’s hard to believe that you’re not all alone

Or to know that you need not despair,

For answers there are, and friendship too,

To make anguish less painful to bear.

                           ____

Living in Brighton later in her life, Ma didn’t have to go far to see lonely or homeless people; she would have brought them all home if she could.

 Street Life

Old man sitting on a seat

Watching people down the street,

Where is his home? Has he a wife?

Or has he a friend to share his life?

So many people passing by

Give not a glance, nor wonder why

He’s sitting there, the lunch hour gone,

And makes no move, as if for home.

Old man sitting on a seat

His heart more weary than his feet.

As darkness falls the street lights glow,

Old man you really ought to go

Homeward to your lonely room,

Or hopefully you’re expected soon

By someone, perhaps a friend or wife

Who shares with you a happy life.

Old man sitting on a seat

Watching people down the street.

                   ______

 Seagulls

Why do they call when it’s dark at night?

As they fly by the streets reflected light

They seem to know when dreams are broken

With their plaintive cries like thoughts unspoken.

                      ______

 Finally, another very short poem Ma wrote when her friend’s father died many years ago. I asked the vicar to read this one at her funeral. I’d like to have read it myself – but I couldn’t.

 On the Death of a Friend’s Father

With the sigh of the wind

And the mist on the hill

There is peace now at sunset

And the rivers flow still.

                      ______

 

 On Ma’s behalf, thank you for visiting, if you’ve enjoyed this post, please Tweet it for others to share her poems, and do feel free to leave a comment. I don’t know how these things work but maybe she’ll see it.

Though lovers be lost love shall not; and death shall have no dominion.”  Dylan Thomas

 

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Pictures to Inspire

Pictures To Inspire

Certain images catch my eye anew even years after they were taken; they set my mind on a trail of thoughts often in diverse directions. I decided to share a few with you for this post in case they do the same for you.

The first picture is the trunk of a kauri tree (Agathus australis), a native of northern New Zealand and endemic: it grows nowhere else in the world. Much of the native kauri forest was felled for timber by European settlers; growing up to 30metres high with a smooth, straight bole for most of that distance it’s a woodsman’s delight. But the tree trunk in the photograph below is swamp kauri. It has been extracted from the deep peat swamp that formed around it (and preserved it) some 50,000 years ago when a natural cataclysm felled the entire forest. When worked, swamp kauri has a fine, even grain and dark-gold sheen; it is highly prized for designer furniture and for carving.

What interests me about this ancient fossil tree is that someone has carved leaves on it, as if the carver sought to release the tree’s own memory of what it had once been.

We may all look like ordinary people on the outside, but on the inside, we are each everything we have been since our conception - that is our uniqueness. And in our stories, it can make our characters unique if we think of them with this depth, letting our words carve their leaves on the outside.

 

This portrait of a porter was taken – at his suggestion and to my delight – when I trekked the Annapurna Circuit in Nepal in the 1980s (the peak of Mount Machhapuchhare is just visible in the background on the left). During the three-week trek we talked often. A kind and thoughtful companion, Dhawa was a family man who struggled to support his children’s education so they could lead a different life, although he feared they would become like strangers to him.

I was reminded of this photograph when I read Barak Obama’s address to the British parliament on his recent visit. He commented that the grandson of a Kenyan, who served as a cook in the British army, now spoke to them as president of the United States of America, and I wondered where Dhawa’s grandchildren were and what they were doing. The potential in every human being is almost beyond comprehension.

 

Taken early morning inside the temple of Nefertari at Abu Simbel, southern Egypt, this photograph was one of those lucky ‘grab shots’ you get once in a while. I’d been examining the wall paintings and turned around, simultaneously pressing the shutter release and thinking a hieroglyph had stepped down from the wall to walk in the light. So many associations and spin-offs come out of this image I will leave you to experience your own.

 

 

 

And now the final one in this post.

 

 

Puzzled? I hope so.

 An artist friend told me that to appreciate a scene with fresh perspective you should bend down and view it from between your legs. Mount Chomolhari in western Bhutan is a shy mountain usually hiding behind cloud; sighting it at dawn was like a revelation, but seeing it upside down creates a whole new experience.

 (Confession: I cheated for this one, flipped the pic over in my picasa programme).

Do you find pictures inspire you to write? If so, please do let me know with a comment or a tweet and I’ll do some more for you in the future.

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Glasshopper by Isabel Ashdown: A Review

As a volunteer counsellor some years ago in Portsmouth – one of the settings of Glasshopper as it happens – I never ceased to be amazed by the resilience of people who had been through every kind of hell. And it wasn’t as if I came from a sheltered upbringing: I’d had a pretty challenging childhood myself. That experience often created a bond between me and the distressed person sitting beside me, an unspoken bond – counsellors don’t bang-on about their own issues – but I’m sure it made me a more effective listener.

 Perhaps it also sharpened my appreciation of novels written from a troubled child’s point of view. It’s not often an author captures fully the wrenching ambivalence within a child forced by circumstances to be responsible for those who should guide him; a child still coping with the urgency of his own immaturity and vulnerability. Isabel Ashdown has achieved it in her début novel, Glasshopper.

The story has all the ingredients of family relationships shredded by unmet expectations and personal frailties: emotional blackmail, the treachery of drink, temptations of transitory comfort from a brief sexual fling, and threading through it all, whatever love and hope manage to survive. Although a moving story that often grabs you at the throat, Glasshopper is neither morbid nor depressing. Memorable characters like old Mr Horrocks who has the corner shop, Aunt Sandy, the boisterous, tarted-up family friend, and the unlovely grandmother, play minor but pivotal roles that give the narrative added depth and warmth; as do picnics on the beach, skies full of starlings, and the author’s compassionate humour. In particular, the irrepressible young Jake whose sensibility and loyalty, though tested almost to breaking point, anchors not only the novel but his dysfunctional family.

We first meet Jake with a school mate indulging in the natural cheeky mischief of a thirteen-year-old, but there are limits to any friendship because Jake is dealing with family secrets he cannot share. His mother’s mood swings, from helplessly drunk amid the chaos of a neglected household, to periods of normality when she bakes cakes and “smells warm and clean”, have driven away both her eldest son and her husband, Billy, who tries ineffectually to keep an eye on their two younger sons from a nearby bed-sitter.

Jake lives for the Saturdays he and his younger brother Andy spend with their father: crisps and coke, perhaps a film at the cinema or a fish and chip supper. During the week he has to look after Andy as well as his mother if she is on a binge. Sometimes there is only breakfast cereal in the cupboard and the smell of stale gin in the kitchen. A daunting situation which does not diminish Jake’s enjoyment of working his paper round (he’s saving for a hi-fi), or his Classics lessons at school with the entrancing Miss Terry.

But this is not only Jake’s story. The novel is structured with two timelines. As we share eighteen months of Jake’s life spanning 1984-5, in alternating chapters his mother tells her own story of childhood in a respectable family of the 1950s, her marriage to Billy, and the unsettling events of their lives; the two time lines meeting shortly before the end of the novel.

This is not a book I could devour in one or two sittings. Don’t misunderstand me: Isabel Ashdown writes in delightfully fluid prose, but her attention to detail is extraordinary. It’s as if the story is happening in real time, and it’s very visual; I needed to pause to take it all in and deal with my reactions. Time sequences and changes in location mark critical developments in the story – in Portsmouth, Brighton, the Isle of Wight, and the Dordogne in France – periods and places skilfully evoked with details of landscape, food, entertainment and social mores. Jakes own observations are revealing: visiting the better functioning household of family friends, he takes particular note that all the dining chairs match. He would: I remember similar wonder at my first sight of matching china on a visit to wealthy relatives. It is this perceptiveness of the author that keeps us close inside Jakes head and deeply involved in this period of his life.

The novel has been described as a coming-of-age story which in a sense it is, but above all it is about family love, its difficulties and demands, and sometimes its denial. The story moves towards hope of a reunited family but other secrets erupt before its devastating ending. Perhaps this final act too is an act of love.

ISBN: 978-0-9549309-7-4

Isabel Ashdown’s, Glasshopper, is published by Myriad Editions. It was awarded the Observer ‘Best Débuts of 2009’, and Evening Standard ‘Best Book of the Year’. On her website www.isabelashdown.com  you can find details of her second novel launched in July, Hurry Up and Wait, and of book-signings and other events.

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The Pink Bobble Hat

 A flash-fiction story:

The Pink Bobble Hat

A lovely young man picked me up – before I hit the ground, fortunately.  I was walking along the High Street looking in shop windows and didn’t notice the loose paving stone. I felt myself falling; a strange powerlessness like being sucked into a giant vacuum cleaner.

 It’s a pink bobble hat I was searching for, but nobody had one. It’s not surprising of course; they are rather ghastly. But my friend, Rosemary, knitted one for me last Christmas during an unprecedented lapse in taste. Well, I can’t find the wretched thing and Rosemary is coming to visit, so I’m desperate to replace it.

Such an extraordinary thing for her to make: in the fifty years I’ve known her, she’s always been impeccably dressed, even when we were gals at Cheltenham Ladies College. I was the blue-stocking; more interested in my Theophrastus than the prevailing fashions, although I do remember being given an exquisite evening stole for my twenty-first birthday. It was made of black silk with a narrow trim of fur. I wore it at our graduation ball.

They were exciting days, the 1950s. There was still some rationing but we were all so positive about the future. And Ernest Hemingway won the Nobel Prize – such a vigorous writer. I met him once, at a party in Málaga, but he was a sick man by then. I wonder what Rosemary reads these days – she lives in Worcester, out in the sticks – haven’t seen her for years.

The lifestyle of an embassy wife made it hard to hold onto old friends, but I wouldn’t have missed it. All those years in the Far East were such a thrilling experience – once I learnt how to manage the servants. Embassy widows can’t afford them, unfortunately.

Well, the guest room is ready, and Rosemary arrives tomorrow. We’ve always been fond of each other and I’m so looking forward to seeing her again. I hope she won’t think I simply discarded that dreadful hat; it probably went to the animal welfare people … Oh, now who is that at the door just when I’ve made the tea?

“Rosemary! How lovely…”

“Hello, Meryl, I brought milk.”

“Thank you, dear. So thoughtful. Oh, and you’re wearing one of your pink bobble hats.”

 “I love it. Keeps my hair tidy and it’s such fun. Didn’t you give me this for Christmas last year?”

Poor dear, she seems terribly muddled.  I do hope the next few days aren’t going to be too tiresome.

“It’s so lovely to see you, Rosemary, but I was expecting you tomorrow you know. But really, it doesn’t matter a bit. The tea is just this minute made so do sit down, dear, you must be so tired after that dreadfully long journey.”

“Oh, Meryl, do try to remember. I’m in the flat upstairs now. Shall I pour, my dear?”

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History in the Attic

I don’t have a roof-space; mine is a small single-storey cottage with beams – not even old ones – but my living room is pretty much like anyone else’s can’t-find-a-thing-for-dust-and-boxes attic.

Yesterday, whatever I was searching for in one of these boxes was pushed out of my head when I found a small forgotten treasure: a booklet, A Short Historyof East Stoke, Dorset, by The Rev. Hugh Selwyn Taggart – my gorgeous granddad!

He wrote it while he was Rector of Saint Mary-the-Virgin in East Stoke, England, probably in 1939 as that would have been the centenary of the ‘new’ church building (the original church dating from at least 1306). On the cover is written ‘With the author’s compliments’; it hadn’t been addressed to me, I wasn’t even a twinkle in anyone’s eye then so it must have been sent to me by my aunt at some time in the distant past.

Why he took up the living in Dorset in 1936 , or how long he stayed there, I don’t know; he was a Manxman and, like his father before him, was ‘Parson Taggart’ of St Matthews Church in Douglas for most of his career. It was in the Isle of Man as a child that I knew him. Visiting him was a huge treat. Retired by then and becoming frail, he would beckon me nearer, his eyes shining with smiles, and talk in his soft confiding voice as if I was the only person in the world he could possibly share his thoughts with. And now he’s quietly re-appeared in New Zealand from a box under the bed.

I turned the booklet over to the advertisements on the back: ‘George Dicker, Grocer, Wareham. Telephone: Wareham 11’. That telephone number says so much. Is Dicker’s still there?

The booklet begins: “The name of our Parish is derived from the Saxon word “stoke,” which meant a village. In the reign of William l its over-lord was the Earl of Mortain (or Moreton). Before the Conquest it belonged to a Saxon named Edmer and had a mill worth 50s. This is undoubtedly the Mill which still stands, though it no longer grinds.”

 

A later section gives a potted history of several ancient ‘big houses’ of the area, including Hethfelton (Hafelton in the Doomsday Book); Stockford and, of course, Woolbridge, famous for its part in Thomas Hardy’s Tess of the d’Urbervilles. Originally belonging to the Abbey of Bindon, Woolbridge came into ownership of the Turberville family in the reign of Elizabeth l. The last Turbervilles were twin sisters who lived all their lives together and died in the same house (in Fulham) in the same year at the age of 77 years. “The portraits of the two Turberville ladies, whose features caused Tess in Hardy’s novel to shudder, are still to be seen on the walls of the first-floor landing.” 

 

Granddad used his own detailed sketches in describing the ruins of the old church and the ‘new’ building as it was in his time. I can imagine that sitting in one of the pews and sketching his own church gave him particular delight: it was not his usual view from in front of the altar or in the pulpit.

Of special interest to him, though, would have been the Parochial Records: he always took a practical interest in the physical as well as spiritual wellbeing of his flock – to the annoyance of my grandmother it was not unusual for him to give away his clothes or even his dinner if a needy person knocked at the vicarage door. In the early 1800s, in the absence of a welfare state or of union benefit societies, the poor were assisted by officials of the Parish using funds collected by local levy. A few of the many examples in the booklet are given below:

There was another problem in the Parish at this time, too. At a Vestry Meeting on 29th April 1802, it was decided to pay the following bounties for the killing of vermin within the Parish of East Stooke [sic] : 2 shillings a dozen for rat’s heads; 2 pence per dozen for sparrow’s heads, and 4 pence for each and every hedgehog’s head.

(It may be some comfort to know that no payment for hedgehog’s heads is recorded).

As a final extract, here are the lists of Rectors from 1306, and of People’s Wardens which were listed only from 1860. If you are from the area you might know some of these names: one of them might be your granddad or great-granddad.

 

Regrettably I was born too late to hear Granddad preach at St. Matthews in the Isle of Man, but my Aunt (Betty Taggart) – who dedicated her life to teaching infants and looking after both her aging parents – once told me that when Granddad offered sung evensong, the church was so full people stood in the aisles right back into the porch. I suspect most of the ladies of the parish were secretly in love with him.

I was only 9 years old when Granddad died at the age of 92; I couldn’t expect him to wait for me much longer but I feel an unreasonable sadness that I wasn’t born a few years earlier, or Granddad born later.

If you still have grandparents, go and talk with them; if not, try ferreting around in the attic – you never know what treasure you might find.

I would love to have comments on this post, especially if you are from the Isle of Man or Dorset or know anybody who knows anybody mentioned here, or you can use the ‘Contact’ page to email me if you wish.

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The Devil’s Music : A review

The Devil’s Music by Jane Rusbridge: A review

Already there is heated debate about prologues in novels; widely divergent views are staunchly defended on both sides. So what kind of novel starts, not even with a prologue, but with an illustrated glossary of nineteen types of knot?

The answer: one whose author has the confidence to take up an unlikely, though deeply resonant, symbol and thread it through an ingeniously original tale.

The technique of knotting is at least as old as the first hunter’s snare – and as universal. Though the function of each knot is explicit, the symbolism is not always so clear; intricate Celtic knot patterns in the ancient Book of Kells still hold their mystery despite decades of study. Scholars are reluctant to assign specific meaning to individual knots but many would agree on a general interpretation of interlacing – the most characteristic of Celtic designs – as the intertwining of spiritual and physical experiences. And this is the innermost core of The Devil’s Music: the mind’s interpretation of events and the impact of that internal reality on how a life is lived.

 Around this core the yarn loops and crosses, binding together the three main narratives of the story: Andy’s childhood, which is woven through the second narrative of his return thirty years later, and that of his mother. In an unusual structure, Andy’s story is narrated in the first person: his mother’s in the second, but this is more than a writer’s device to separate narrative streams; it implies differences in self-perception, and signals development by a sudden switch in the last chapter.

The book jacket describes The Devil’s Music as “a moving novel about love, betrayal and family secrets.” It has all of these, and loss and guilt as well, but the novel takes us deep into the needs and subsequent choices that create them. Fate takes some choices out of our hands but those we make ourselves become the fate of others.

Nine-year-old Andy’s devotion to his baby sister is undaunted by adult diagnosis that she is ‘not all there’. He gives her the nickname, Jelly, and finds his own way of communicating with her and making her giggle. The brief opening scene, set in the late 1950s, shows him minding the baby on the beach while his mother and other younger sister, Susie, buy ice cream. The scene and the often inconsequential but revealing thoughts of a child are minutely and skilfully observed – a deftness that Jane Rusbridge carries right through the novel, anchoring changes in time and location.

Jelly lies on my towel by the pool I’ve dug for her. She was lumpy as a bag of coal in my arms and nearly as heavy; my chin knocked on her head and my bare feet burned on the pebbles. But she was too hot and squashed in her carrycot. She couldn’t stop crying. Further up the shingle bank my mother’s empty deckchair billows red and white stripes.

Honey is circling, nose down. Round and round Jelly and our pool. I see Jelly has rolled onto her stomach. Honey sits down. She barks once; twice. The man digging for lug worms pauses and looks up, a foot on his spade. Goose bumps rise on my arms.

This first chapter reveals the tragic memory that haunts Andy’s childhood and still circumscribes his life when he returns to the beach 30 years later. He has become a drifter, an avoider of relationships and commitments, but at Susie’s suggestion he stays to renovate the family’s old seaside cottage and attempts to face down the past. A past that includes a doting mother dragged down by grief, a father strict to the point of brutality, and his own, often dangerous, identification with Hudini as an emotional escape. But there is Grampy and his rope lore. Grampy, who calls him ‘my treasure’, and teaches him the knowledge of knots that recurs throughout Andy’s story as a means of both self-preservation and self-expression. A final overwhelming loss seals Andy’s future of rootless detachment; a lifestyle caught only in glimpses after he returns to the beach house and is drawn, almost unwittingly, into an intense relationship.

His mother’s narrative enriches the context of Andy’s story, but also has a life of its own as she strains to cope with the loss of a child and to retain her own identity within a repressive marriage. Her story has its own arc which I won’t spoil with further detail. Susie’s life is not uneventful either although we see it only through Andy’s eyes and her interactions with him. Chapter by chapter these individual story threads – the frayed ends of a traumatised family – are woven together in a novel that enfolds rather than unfolds.

Despite the inner journeys of the main characters, this is not a slow read; the prose is crisp, the dialogue sharp; joy and healing as well as sadness draw the reader on to the next loop in Jane Rusbridge’s engrossing novel.

ISBN: 978 1 4088 0101 7

The Devil’s Music (2009) is published by Bloomsbury, and was Shortlisted in the International IMPAC Literary Award 2011.

Jane Rusbridge’s second novel, Rook, is due for release in 2012. Details of events and the first chapter of The Devil’s Music can be read on her website:  www.janerusbridge.co.uk/

If you are seriously interested in knots after reading this book, the International Guild of Knot Tyers (yes, that’s how they spell it) is at www.igkt.net where you can find charts to show you how to make fancy knots just like Grampy.

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How I Joined the e-Book Game

When I announced I had a new publisher, this is what happened:

My friend didn’t even look up from the rugby match on her telly, “What’s the big excitement, you’ve been published before.”

True. But this time I’ve signed up with a publisher who specialises in e-books for apps and kindles and all those ‘state of the art’ gadgets.

And then she asked, “Why?” Which is a good question because although it is also a non-fiction book, the topic has nothing to do with my other current project which is…well, ‘waiting’. We all know what the waiting is like and I needed to be writing something else in the meantime.

I treasure print books old and new, their silky feel, their leafy smell. Every room in my house is bulging with books, but my deepest love is for words, and those I want to share in every way I can.

From the sidelines I’d been attempting for months to follow the seismic shifts in publishing and new technologies; reading blogs, articles, and tweets; trying to sort out the anguish from the euphoria – and who was feeling which. I was getting blogged down in terminology, platforms, conversions, downloads, and now Mount Amazon is erupting and setting it all on fire.

Only partly daunted, I edged into the changing room and contacted some authors who had e-books on the market; exchanged a few emails with experts on the technicalities of writing for these formats, and looked at my friend’s iPad and e-reader. I even entered a competition for a free kindle (there is Scottish ancestry on my mother’s side).

But I’ve now stepped out onto the playing field to join the www.collca.com team of e-book authors. They started with two popular series, “History In An Hour”, and “The Irish Story”, mainly for iPad and iPhone, but they are expanding into other platforms and new topics for their commuters, students, and curious readers. You can follow Mike Hyman’s Tweets, @collca, to see more of what they do.

Collca recently put out a call on their website for submissions from writers of non-fiction. In one of those serendipitous moments I sent in a proposal which was accepted. It is a new and exciting experience for me to write specifically for e-publication, and I love the idea of a ‘one-hour read’ – as many of you know, I’m a flash writing addict.

 I’m about a third of the way through the project now and enjoy writing with my social anthropologist’s hat on: I’m taking you with me to the sunny Philippines to participate in a spectacular cultural event. But more details in future posts.

If there is any sense in the world, e-books will add to the options both for readers and writers rather than replace print books, but given the buzz of the current market it is not surprising I should grab the ball and run for touch.

(My apologies to rugby fans: as I live in New Zealand it is impossible at the moment to think outside the scrum).

UPDATE: my e-book is now released. Mike Hyman did a wonderful job on the conversion, including 26 full colour plates: Masks of the Moryons – Easter Week in Mogpog. Details, preface and access to e-retailers:  http://collca.com/motm

 

And my second e-book, published by Collca on 20 April 2012, with even more photographs, is a travelogue, Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon. Details, preface and access to e-retailers: http://collca.com/jib

 

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Interview: Livia Blackburne

I’m delighted to introduce brain scientist, writer, blogger and tweeter, Livia Blackburne, as my first interview guest. If you haven’t already come across Livia in cyberspace, here is her brief bio:

Livia Blackburne is a doctoral candidate at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology conducting dissertation research on the neural correlates of reading in children and adults. When she’s not scanning brains, Livia writes young adult fantasy and blogs about the psychology of fiction at A Brain Scientist’s Take on Writing. http://blog.liviablackburne.com   She is also the author of From Words to Brain published by 40K Books.

Welcome to my website, Livia. Your blog posts give fascinating insights into how a character’s mind works, and I’d like to start by asking you about the genre you write – high fantasy. I get muddled over genre, would you explain how high fantasy differs from other kinds of fantasy?

Livia: I’ve heard several conflicting definitions of high fantasy,and my novel fits some of them. Basically, I write fantasy that takesplace in an alternate world, in a medieval setting. This is differentfrom, say, urban fantasy, that takes place in today’s world, ordystopia, which usually takes place in a futuristic “dystopic”setting.

Trish: What is it that appeals to you about high fantasy?

Livia: Well, it’s my favorite genre to read. I think I get enough reality in my everyday life, and I like the idea of going into different worlds, where the laws of physics don’t hold and all kinds of cool things can happen.

Trish: And you’re probably more aware of the laws of physics than most of us. I’m intrigued by your combination of systematic scientific mind, and fanciful artistic mind. In what ways do they conflict or complement each other in your writing?

Livia: I think the two ways of thinking are helpful, and the cross-pollination helps both my science and my art. I do think I approach creative writing a lot more analytically than a lot of other writers. I tend to break things down into their component parts and look at them that way. It’s certainly not the only way to learn about writing, but I found it very helpful. On the other hand, I find that science requires a lot of creativity. It takes a lot to think outside the box and ask questions that people haven’t thought of before. Also, scientific writing is often about telling a story. I remember turning in a draft of a research paper to my advisor, and his advice was to rewrite the introduction to tell a more compelling story and draw people in. I kind of felt like I needed to turn in my writer card after that J

Trish: A bit of an embarrassing moment for a fantasy writer, interesting though, that his comment echoes the growing application of storytelling to everything – even to a scientific paper. What do you do to tune-in to one mode of thought or the other?

Livia: For fiction I spend a lot of time daydreaming, mapping out the scenes in my head, really seeing them, before I put them down. For nonfiction, I find it too hard to list out a coherent argument in my head. Instead, I do a progressive outline, where I basically just plop thoughts down, and then I circle back multiple times to flesh out the ideas until I have a complete paper.

Trish: At what stage is your novel-in-progress at the moment?

Livia: I recently signed with an agent, so I am revising. Most of the revisions have to do with deepening character and emotions in the story. I tend to be a plot-based writer and think of characters as things I need in order for a plot-point to happen (not recommended :-P ), so I think this round of revisions will do a lot to add emotional depth and weight to the story.

Trish: Congratulations on finding an agent. So you’re all set for the traditional publishing route. Did you ever think about self-publishing?

Livia: I thought long and hard about whether to self publish, and even as I was querying, I wasn’t quite sure what I would do. I finally did end up going with an agent and am currently pursuing the traditional route. There were several factors, including the current e-book penetration in the children’s market, as well as the fact that my current online platform reaches mostly adults. But the biggest selling point had to do with craft. Basically, I look at my manuscript and objectively speaking, it doesn’t have the polish and depth of my favorite traditionally published books. And as I was talking to agents, I realized that they were smart, savvy people with really intelligent things to say about how to improve my manuscript. I decided that as a young writer, there would be value in going to the process with an agent and then an editor.

Trish: That’s an important point, I think – to know where we are and define our own objectives before deciding how best to publish our work. You have a demanding job too, what advice would you give to others with full time careers who also want to write fiction?

Livia: Time management is half the battle. If you can set aside a block of time to work on your story, then that’s really helpful. Otherwise, life just gets in the way. One prolific writer I know takes advantage of his hour-long commute to write on the subway. He gets a lot of writing done.

Trish: We’d better let you get back to yours. Thank you, Livia, for taking the time to answer my questions, I’ve very much enjoyed having you here.

Livia: Thank you so much for having me!

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Barcelona: My Rambla

Salsa, souvenirs, saints, statue artists, or escalope de seitan:  La Rambla has them all at different times and locations.

It also has theatres, museums, markets, and lots of places for changing your money – so you can keep pick-pockets supplied. Depending on the time of day and which part of its length you walk – from the bottom end opposite the docks, to the top end at Plaça de Catalunya – La Rambla can be a sundrenched sensation or a rubbish-strewn rendezvous for layabouts of all nationalities, but it’s always fascinating.

Ask a dozen people to describe La Rambla and you’ll get ten different impressions. One woman I met couldn’t stop talking about smelly drains. Her complaint has a strong whiff of truth: La Rambla borders the old Gothic quarter, Barri Gòtic, the city’s ancient heart that has throbbed for 2000 years – its sewers are entitled to draw attention to themselves. Other tourists rave about the food, riotous nights in the Plaça Reial, or the day their wallet was stolen. Everybody’s Rambla is different: this is mine.

I’ve left my cheap but friendly accommodation by 7am. Behind the Plaça Reial, my hotel is 100 metres from La Rambla, one alley up from the red-light district’s squalid maze leading to the dockyard, but at this time of the morning the streets are pristine. Cleaning crews go through at intervals day and night, though it’s a squeeze for their vehicles in some of these alleys.

They haven’t got as far as the Plaça Reial; it is still hung-over with signs of the night’s revelry.

 

But there’s no need to rush, its bars and restaurants will be deserted for hours.

 

Empty streets reveal touches of antiquity obscured during the day by tangles of tourists in cheeky tee-shirts and shades. I smile with delight at this door-knocker every morning.

 

I’m heading for my usual breakfast of papaya, coffee and home-baked pastries at the Mercat de la Boqueria – San Josep food market – half way up La Rambla on the left.

 

 

Some traders are still unpacking produce – the market doesn’t open officially until 8am, but I use a small bar at the back which starts early because it serves stallholders. No words are needed to appreciate the appetising sights and smells here; hang on to your bag, saunter along the aisles and tempt your senses. 

 

 

 

 

Hands up who wants a fruit salad?

 

 

 

Tearing myself away from the market and just one more bon-bon, it’s safe to meander along gazing at extraordinary buildings because La Rambla is paved and reserved for pedestrians. By early evening it will be lined with cafes and restaurants from end to end; white canvas umbrellas looking down on their matching linen table clothes.

Now though, it rings with the clackity-clack-clack of suitcases dragged along by tourists rushing to the airport bus terminal, and the click-click of office high heels heading to work. The rest of us can stroll in the authentic Spanish mañana style.

 And I see this gorgeous dragon on my way to the metro station.

 

I’m going to La Sagrada Famíliar today, but that’s part of Gaudi’s Barcelona; I’ll take you there another day.

 

When I return to La Rambla in the afternoon, craft and gift kiosks vie with flower stalls for attention. And there’s La Sagrada – in wax candles this time.

 

 

Behind a glass panel an exquisite wax hand is sculptured to hold a rose without fragrance.

 

Sleight-of-hand gambling tricks are a good way to divert tourists’ attention away from their cameras and wallets – or so a local woman cautions me as I take this photograph.

 

Impromptu serenaders migrate between cafe pitches, seeking generous patrons.

 

La Rambla is now crowded and noisy, grinding traffic with occasional squealing brakes play a raucous tune to snatches of  passing ‘lyrics’ from a dozen languages. People saunter by, comparing menus, deciding where to drink now or where to eat later. I find the wafts of cooking oil and coffee with undertones of diesel fumes unappetising

Knots of onlookers in the street usually indicate a statue artist; you don’t see these human statues until you push to the front. Actors stand with their backs to the traffic so their audience faces them, but this angel just stepped down from her pedestal to answer her mobile phone!

 

Another is worth a backward glance.

 

 

Only new visitors pay rapt attention; once they’ve walked La Rambla for a few days, people become blasé.

They are clever creations though.

 

And sometimes the effect is more eye-catching than intended.

 

 

Back at Plaça Reial a stamp and coin collectors’ market is in full swing.

 

But these exhibits are bottle-tops – signs of recession?

 

Time to decide where I’m going to eat.

 

Well, it’s been in business for over 100 years; that’s quite a recommendation.

Hasta luego!

If you are interested in travelogue, you may enjoy my new e-book Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, published by Collca in their BiteSizeTravel series. Details, preface, and access to e-retailers:  http://collca.com/jib

 

 

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How to Critique & Stay Friends

Listening to honest feedback is one of the most effective ways of improving our writing, but how do we prevent it affecting a friendship?

Accepting a critique doesn’t mean slavishly changing our story to follow others’ suggestions; they are only opinions, and anyway, if we invite comments from several people their perceptions may vary.

But it does give us a reader’s perspective and it can raise issues that we are too involved in the work to identify for ourselves: a contradiction in the plot, a character that seems vivid to us but no-one else finds believable, or the deviously hidden twist at the end…that they guessed after the second paragraph.

Some professional critique services are excellent, but for short stories they’re a luxury few of us can afford very often. Most on-line writing groups provide free mutual feedback but not everyone feels comfortable receiving this in an open forum. And while we may need that biased praise from family to keep us slogging on, it’s not going to sharpen our prose or strengthen our story structure. Writing buddies giving mutual feedback is the obvious answer. The only problem is, however constructive the criticism, and however philosophically we try to respond, it still hurts to have our creations picked over and found wanting; it can strain a relationship.

When our small Scribblers group started to bring first drafts of short stories for mutual feedback we found some common criteria for assessing and commenting on each other’s work; bench marks we could refer to. They help us focus on priorities and avoid getting bogged in details.

More important perhaps, they are a neutral presence, an impersonal framework. They provide a dialect for ‘talking story’ rather than ‘talking personal’.

The criteria we use are from the Writer’s Village competition website http://www.writers-village.org   John Yeoman generously agreed to my reproducing them here for this post. He uses these guidelines to judge entries for Writers Village short story competitions, based on a total potential score of 45 for each story. (Most competitions use something similar). We don’t use the scoring in our Scribblers group, but we find the criteria helpful.

 1. Does the story emotionally engage the reader?

A maximum of ten points go to the stories which engage me emotionally throughout. I read many entries that are impressively clever. They dance with ingenuity, wit or wordplay. But they are cerebral exercises, not stories. That said, a truly witty story may win high points. Laughter is an emotion too!

 2. Is it original?

I then award up to ten points for a story’s originality. True, there are just 36 story plots or themes, according to Georges Polti (1916), but there’s always room for a new twist on Cinderella, Bluebeard’s cupboard or Romeo and Juliet. Point is, the twist has to be fresh.

 3. Is the first paragraph imbued with power?

The quality of the first paragraph gains a further maximum of eight points. Does it compel me to read on? I am seriously underwhelmed by shock openings along the lines of ‘I pulled the trigger. The punk fell dead’. Yawn! What gains my vote instead is the intrigue or enchantment of the opening lines.

4. Does the story have a sense of form?

Another eight points in total are allocated to the story’s sense of form. It has to show a coherent progression, a plot structure involving conflict between characters (or entities represented as characters) and a satisfying conclusion.

Many a fine story lacks ‘closure’, of course. It may leave the reader with untidy loose ends or an unresolved mystery. It might even appear, at first glance, to be a collection of vivid but disjointed impressions (Joyce’s Ulysses comes to mind.)

But the story still has to be rigorous in its construction. I have to feel: nothing could usefully have been added to it or cut. It’s a ‘whole’.

 5. Is the language well handled?

I then allot up to six points for the originality or deft use of language. A story does not need to dance with spry metaphors or turn somersaults in its syntax. Indeed, an outlandish tale often gains great emphasis by being told in the most prosaic language. But clichés, clumsiness and lazy expressions are a no, no.

 6. Is the grammar, punctuation and presentation professional?

A final three points are given for the professionalism of the presentation. I have no problems with the odd misspelling or typing error. (I make enough of them myself :) ) But I do shudder at the systematic misuse of apostrophes!

Tip: If you visit Writers’ Village website you can see these guidelines in action because John Yeoman has just posted the winning stories from the Autumn 2011 Short Story Competition.

 How do you handle mutual feedback and still remain friends?

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Another Philippines

Another Philippines

There is more to the Philippines than sun, sea, sand and…smiles. Although millions of tourists every year head for beaches and night spots, these islands have other extraordinarily diverse environments, peoples and cultures.

A favourite merienda between meals – or even between snacks – is the ubiquitous pancit, but there are almost as many ways of serving this spicy noodle dish as there are cooks to prepare it.

In addition to many indigenous cultures and languages, different islands have adapted the influence of Malay, Chinese, Arab, Spanish, and latterly, western languages and customs and woven them into their own cultural fabric.

During five years of work and study in the Philippines I was lucky enough to travel widely: from Ilagan in the north, to Davao in the south; from Tacloban in the east, to Puerto Princessa in the west. Here is just a small collection from some of my favourite memories to share with you a little of that diversity. (The two boys in the header picture are members of the Mangyan tribe in Mindoro Island).

While you relax and enjoy the white sands of Boracay island,

 

Spare a thought for those who are working: with all the building of new resorts along the seafront, someone has to carry-in the bricks!

 

Not everyone benefits from tourism; local families still try to supplement their income with fishing

 

Or with agriculture in what little land is left to them in the hills.

A very old lady on Boracay, one of the few remaining descendants there of the Ati, the indigenous Negrito peoples, told me the legend of how Boracay got its name. The story was passed down to her from her mother-in-law.

Long ago when Boracay was wild and forested, the Ati moved back and forth from neighbouring Aklan to plant tobacco and vegetables in the fertile soil. A group of Spaniards came ashore, attracted by the white sand, and walked into the hills to talk to the Ati. They asked the name of the shells they had picked up from the beach and were told, sigay; they asked what the men were planting and were told, boray – the name of the vegetable seed; from these two words the island became known as Boracay.

Further south, on the eastern side of the large island of Mindanao, is Davao (Dabaw) City. A thriving centre for business, industry and tourism supporting some 1.5 million inhabitants, it suffers also the sleaze, crime and human abuse of any urban conglomeration.

Rural poverty and encroachment of massive agribusiness plantations drive people into the city, if only to a square of floor space in a crowded settlement overhanging mosquito-ridden water.

 

Despite challenging living conditions, the young man living here, who plies his trade as a pedicab driver, is not the only one who sports a fresh, sparkling white tee-shirt every day. The local gang guards his pedicab for a few pesos while he goes for merienda.

 

Such is the spirit of making something out of whatever is at hand, Filipinos could teach us a lot about re-cycling – these are made from old truck tyres in the style of traditionally woven rattan.

 

And the love of colour and pattern are evident in the various indigenous weaving styles. Each tribe has its own distinctive patterns handed down through generations. The weaver pictured here is a Mandaya, from Davao del Sur.

 

Familiar icon of the Philippines, the jeepney – originating from a long-based version of the American Jeep – is a tough vehicle, but overloaded with people or goods as they usually are, they can run into trouble on muddy country tracks.

 

And now we are heading towards northern Luzon, passing through another hazard. Recidivist volcano, Mount Pinatubo smokes and rumbles and never rests, but in 1991 it threw a major eruption that blew off the top of the mountain, scattering debris for miles around. Worse damage, though, was caused by torrential rains that followed. Volcanic dust quickly turned into running mud which smothered rice fields, farms, villages and roads in metres deep liquid ash – lahar. Dried out and compacted, this is what the man on the carabao is riding through.

 

About 100 miles further north as the crow flies, on the edge of the Cordillera, is Baguio, a city of cool mountain breezes, clear bright sunshine and prolific markets. For Filipinos who can afford it, it is a favourite retreat from the heat and pollution of lowland cities.

 

Our final destination is Ifugao, home of ancient tribal cultures and rice terraces which their inheritors struggle to maintain. The village of Batad, pictured here in the last glance of late afternoon sun, is just east of Banaue.

 

One last picture…

Like the ant you may not yet have noticed on this hibiscus, a closer look in unexpected places can often reward us with deeper understanding of where we are, and perhaps who we are.

And I took a closer look, at the town of Mogpog on Marinduque Island and at Moryonan – the re-enactment of the legend of Longinus in celebration of the Passion. I spent three years studying Mogpog and the Moryonan, living with a local family for some of that time.

The masks and costumes of the Moryons are spectacular, but Moryonan is a deeply religious event in Mogpog that involves the whole community. You can learn more about Moryonan in Masks of the Moryons: Easter Week in Mogpog, an ebook. Further details from my publisher, Collca, are here > http://collca.com/motm

 

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Stavros Halvatzis: Author Interview

What can screenwriters and novelists teach each other?

Trish: Welcome to my tree-house, Stavros, I’m delighted you agreed to share with us some of your writing insights. Will you tell us, first, a bit about your background?

Stavros: I was born in Alexandria, Egypt, but grew up in Greece and in South Africa prior to moving to England for a couple of years to study film at the London International Film School, on Shelton Street. On my return to South Africa, I started working as the resident screenwriter for Elmo De Witt Films, but also ran my own small company, which created corporate videos for a wide variety of clients.

At about this time, I began teaching creative writing, communication, and digital animation, at colleges and universities, at undergraduate and graduate level in South Africa, an activity which I have continued to pursue in Australia. My biggest challenge has been to find time for my own work, especially the writing of novels. I wrote Scarab, my thriller/science fiction novel some years back and recently updated it for release on Amazon kindle, but haven’t had the chance to do much beyond that.

Encouraged by the promising response to Scarab, I’ve decided to step back from full-time teaching at the end of this year to concentrate on my writing. In terms of academic work, I am currently awaiting the conferral of my PhD on new narrative structures from the University of Southern Queensland.  

Trish: And for those who haven’t yet discovered it, your website:  http://stavroshalvatzis.com/  is a great source of writing tips. Stavros, you’re a man of many places, and equally wide experience, but what particularly interests me is your background in screenwriting and the film industry. You’re too modest to say so but I know you earned a distinction in writing and editing for your film studies. Could you tell us something about your filming work?

 Stavros: My job at Elmo’s was to sift through hundreds of movie scripts and make recommendations for possible production, but also to write and present my own scripts to the company. Unfortunately, I had entered the South African film industry in the early 1990s, a time of great political anxiety and expectation, when funding for films was being diverted to more pressing social reforms.

 Trish:  Is that why you decided to leave film and concentrate on writing narrative?

Stavros: That was only part of the reason. Working in film is exciting. I have enjoyed the energy and creative anxiety of it all. But it can also be frustrating. It is, at times, especially frustrating for a writer. Depending on the nature of the commission, we are often at the mercy of visible or invisible committees. Increasingly, ideas are evaluated, not according to aesthetic value, but to how well they might sell. This is just the nature of the job. Films cost a lot of money to make, and there is, of course, a lot of pressure to recoup investment. When a script gets past the committees and moves closer to production, it floats beyond the writer’s reach. Much of the script changes during this stage. Some changes are for the better; some, for the worse. In any event, a writer must simply step away from the script once it is sold, or risk becoming a liability to the shoot. Some writers deal with this better than others.

Writing a novel, on the other hand, allows the writer full creative freedom. The fictional world is ours alone to make or break. As novelists, we sink or swim according to our own talents, and the world’s reception of them. At this stage of my life, I like these latter odds more. And now, with kindle and other electronic publishing nodes, we, as writers, are the sole gate-keepers of our fate. I believe we are standing at the threshold of a new era in writing. It feels a little like a revolution.

Trish: Yes, it’s certainly an exciting time to be a writer, especially as the capacity for transmedia productions encourages us to experiment with new forms, including screenwriting. But how different are the techniques of screen writing from narrative writing?

Stavros: This is an interesting question. I’ve recently been thinking that the preparation for writing a screenplay or a novel have a lot more in common than I originally thought, prior to researching the field for my PhD thesis on narrative structures. The overall context of this notion is that today’s audiences/readers are more enamoured of fast-moving narrative. That’s not to say, they are only interested in explosions, hijackings, and gunfights. It is only to suggest that the outer journey – the physical forward-moving aspect of a story is becoming more important in a world influenced by film, commuter games, and the frenetic activities of social media. The challenge for the novelist is to utilize this without harming the inner journey – without which, the outer journey implodes and is rendered meaningless.

The way I plot a screenplay, prior to actually writing it, is to craft the major premise – what the story is about, and then to break it down into seven structural units – the ordinary world, the inciting incident, the first turning point, the mid-point, the second turning point, the climax, and the resolution. Each unit has two components – outer action and its inner motivation. The two streams are inseparable. Indeed, I regard the outer journey as a metaphor, a manifestation, of the inner journey.

 In plotting my next novel, The Level, which I hope to have ready for release by May next year, I am crafting the story spine in exactly the same way as I would the screenplay. The major difference is that the inner journey now has a voice – rendered and expanded through the protagonist’s point of view. The challenge is to present this voice separately from the author’s, while not giving too much away.

Trish: You teach both narrative writing and screenwriting; do they require different approaches to teaching?

Stavros: I’m currently teaching creative writing in various forums, my main thrust, however, has been the screenplay. My approach to the latter has been chiefly structural and functionalist in nature – turning points, mid-point, the story argument, and so on. In terms of technique, screenwriting requires brevity and precision: get the story going as soon as possible and keep it on track; minimise lengthy descriptions. Reveal plot and character through dialogue and representative action. In terms of teaching methodology, I make heavy use of exemplars from existing films, where we take a scene that utilises a specific technique – say the use of effective exposition – and break it down to see how it works. This has influenced my approach in teaching the novel, except that in the novel, we study how the writer uses additional layers to capture the fictional world – how the writer creates and orchestrates the textures, nuances, and rhythms flowing from the written words themselves. This requires additional tuition in the use of language – its music and colour. Here, a close examination of the text itself is the order of the day.

Trish: When I’m writing short stories, I regularly dip into Robert McKee’s Story to help me think in scenes, to focus on ‘show’ rather than ‘tell’, but I’m sure there is more to it than that. What is it that screenwriting techniques have to offer the story writer?

Stavros: The craft of screenwriting, as described by screenwriting gurus such as Syd Field, Robert McKee, Linda Seger, Michael Hauge, Christopher Vogler, is chiefly the craft of visually presenting the Protagonist’s story spine. But it is also the craft of selecting and using those interior elements that drive a story forward though action – goal, motivation, obstacle, confrontation, resolution – an outer journey contextualised and explained by the inner journey. If screenwriting teaches us about using pace, precision and action to drive our stories forward, the novel teaches us how to deepen character by simultaneously adding introspection, memory, and point of view to this pattern. Done well, the result of this synthesis is to produce exciting novels that are tight and kinetic, yet, are no less rich in texture, theme, and symbolism.

Trish: A final question. Developing a voice as a writer is a long term project I think, and we develop all the time, you say there’s been a few years between drafting your first novel and the second one you are currently working on, do you recognise differences in the way you write now?

 Stavros: Well, yes. For a start, I’d like to think I know a lot more about the craft of writing now, than I did then – such as not skipping from perspective to perspective within a scene, or at least, ensuring that if one does so, there are strong dramatic reasons for this; also, better understanding the multiple layers of narration – mine, as Stavros Halvatzis; myself as a writer (who is a construct of Stavros Halvatzis and may or may not directly participate in the story); the biased narrator’s – such as Nick Carraway in Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby, who may be an actual character in the story, and the characters themselves, whose voices are inflected through the aforementioned layers. Above all this, I’d like to think that I understand a lot more about the human heart now than I did a decade ago, and that I’m a little wiser for all my mistakes, both in life, and in art. Lastly, developing one’s voice is more than the sum total of one’s experiences and mastery of technique. It is also something intimately and ineffably tied to the totality of one’s being – one’s soul, if I can put it rather melodramatically. Finding this voice, I think, lies beyond conscious thought. It comes when it’s good and ready.

 Trish: I think that’s a wise answer, if perhaps a frustrating thought for impatient writers. Thank you very much, Stavros, for giving your time to share so many stimulating ideas. I wish you every success with your full-time writing.

Stavros: It’s been my pleasure, Trish. Thank you for the opportunity to talk about the work.

You can follow Stavros on Twitter @SHalvatzis and read more about his novel from his website link near the beginning of this post.

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How to be Inspired by Laundry

Clothes tell stories and reveal secrets. On the washing line they show important traits in your characters. 

Let your mind linger on the laundry and you might feel a story idea wash over you. If you’re lucky enough to have a washing machine you might watch them go round – who tangles with whom – springing open a fresh plot angle.

By hand, the tedium can be relieved by imagining each item’s story: think about the wine stains, split seams, bleeding colours, unexpected trophies in the pockets, what do they tell you about the person, ‘the universe, life and everything’?

But actually, it was other peoples’ laundry I was thinking of.

I should caution you that the study of clotheslines as ‘field research’ is not without its hazards – it’s best not to loiter too long in any one location, and it’s a criminal offence to remove and pocket even the smallest item – neither is it an exact science.

In Venice once, I used this line of washing as a land mark, confident that those coloured T-shirts in the middle distance would lead me back to the right viottola. Unfortunately, they must soon have dried, been collected and replaced by a new lot because I couldn’t find them again and ended up hopelessly lost. But what is on the line can give you insights into the household – the likely ages and numbers of children and adults, their pastimes, tastes and budget – and fresh ways of describing characters.

How does your character hang the washing?  Are some items discreetly hidden from view, tucked-in between others, or brazenly exhibited for all to see? How is it pegged out?  Higgledy-piggledy, hunched and creased as they were dragged from the machine, any old edge gripped onto the line, or neatly … obsessively? 

Instead of telling us:

 ‘Cary was so affected by her new situation she became irrational and obsessive. At times she feared for her sanity,’

You could show us how she hangs her laundry:

 ‘Tea towels first, then pillow cases, table clothes, going up in size to single sheets before the doubles – taking things down and moving them to another place on the line to keep the sizing accurate – it could take all morning, keeping at bay the thoughts that…’

And it’s not only women who have washing to do. Is that man hanging out laundry a true partner in running the household, or a single father?  How, or even if, he deals with dirty linen can tell you a lot about how he is coping. Indeed, his neighbour’s assumptions could subtly mislead your readers until your devastating punch-line.

 

You probably have taps inside your house, and a washing machine, or at least a launderette down the street. Millions of people are less fortunate; they have to lug all their soiled clothes to communal tanks or river banks. If this is your situation, or the setting for your story, the possibilities are equally promising.

The woman chafing dirt from her family’s garments at a river back in Egypt is alone. Usually, a few friends or relatives gather to do this chore companionably; a chance for ‘women’s business’, for scolding, encouraging, and passing on wisdom about men, babies – the dialogue that might drive the next twist in your plot. And come to think of it, why is this woman alone? Well, that’s another story…

And I must share this eye-smarting picture with you.

If you know Kathmandu you will appreciate the miracle of dazzling whiteness. I never found out whose shirts these were – it looks like the Kings College Choir backyard on a Monday morning – but notice the twisted rope in place of pegs: another tiny detail that can resonate in a story.

I don’t want to scrub all the fun out of this idea by pounding it to death – but you get the general Dreft…er…drift?

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The Courtesan’s Lover by Gabrielle Kimm: Review

Though a member of the oldest profession, initiated in the back streets of distant Ferrara, Francesca Felizzi is no common puttana. Now in Napoli, she is a high-class courtesan leading an extravagant life in her own opulent establishment where she entertains patrons of her choice. Not to appreciate this difference is like confusing a board member of Goldman Sachs with the owner of a dingy pawnbrokers round the corner.

 Gabrielle Kimm has researched her subject with diligence. Although we share Francesca’s life – and inevitably her bed on occasion – these scenes are handled with the sensuous delicacy befitting a narrator who prides herself on the ingenuity and subtlety of her art.

Comparing her prowess with that of her cook, Francesca muses: …Lorenzo uses only his legions of herbs, spices and fragrant oils, but we are both true virtuosi and I know we take equal pride in observing the pleasing effects of our skills.

She is the same Francesca who was the Duke of Ferrara’s long-suffering mistress in Gabrielle Kimm’s successful debut, His Last Duchess, but this second novel is not a sequel. It picks up Francesca’s life a few years after her departure from Ferrara to establish an independent life with her young twin daughters. The girls, Beata, and Isabella, are a constant source of innocent joy in this story – making little wax dolls, rushing around the house with miniature feather dusters, and adoring their Mama.

In a society that offers women few options, Francesca has worked hard to achieve her status and wealth. She owns two well equipped and staffed houses – one her place of ‘business’, the other a home for herself and her girls. She has a lot to lose. The gloss of her lifestyle does not blind her to the realities of her situation:

“The life of a courtesan is one of glitter and glamour and exhilarating excitement – but that’s like a … like a sparkling crust over a swamp. Under the crust it’s different. It’s dark and dirty and dangerous. It’s like an endless rush towards the inevitable wreck of your life, in a runaway cart, unable to stop however clearly you see the dangers around you.”

These murky undercurrents, deepened by seemingly innocuous events that have grim consequences, provide tension throughout the novel, yet it is essentially a story about astutely drawn characters and the intrigue of their interlocking relationships.

Modesto, Francesca’s manservant, mentor, general factotum and friend, plays a prominent role in The Courtesan’s Lover, but he has demons of his own to suppress. Modesto is one of the castrati, boys emasculated in sixteenth century Italy in their thousands in order to retain their young soprano voices. Now in his thirties, Modesto’s voice no longer provides a livelihood, but the long shadow of his childhood trauma still torments him.

The novel opens with Modesto helping Francesca dress in a sumptuous red and gold brocade gown for her first visit to a new patron – Miguel Vasquez, an arrogant, wealthy sybarite, Maestre de Campo in the occupying Spanish Army. She has two other regular patrons: Michele di Cicciano, whose lust at times pushes at the boundaries of acceptability, and the over-worked clerk, Filippo de Laviano, seeking release from his frustrations with a frigid wife.

Striking minor characters enrich the tale and linger in the mind. There is Father Ippolito, for example, the priest who sits in the stuffy confines of the confessional box, sweating through the graphic details of Francesca’s disclosures.

She affects her clients in different ways; in turn their disparate actions have huge impact on her life. There is a reason these liaisons are closeted, secret. Her clients have other lives as sons, husbands, brothers, and friends: to step outside the bounds of the boudoir is to be ensnared in unaccustomed relationships with unknown repercussions.

When a series of chance encounters – trivial in isolation – conspire to draw Francesca out of her familiar environment, giving her a glimpse of an alternative, unattainable existence, I was reminded of that ancient string game, Cat’s Cradle. Like Francesca’s occupation, it is a game for two. The first player winds string around their wrists and fingers, pulling their hands apart to tighten the strands into a pattern. The second player grips the taut strings in two places and, taking possession of the whole contrivance, extends the strings to a different arrangement. Once Francesca risks everything to grasp the impossible possibility of a new vision – genuine love – too many hands come into play, manipulating and tightening the cords until she is hopelessly trapped in the ensuing tangle. She cannot go back; she is terrified to go forward.

I am like a hermit crab, pulled from the safety of its armour: soft and naked and vulnerable without its stolen carapace.

As Francesca struggles with this emotional crisis other forces she has unwittingly provoked turn to avenge themselves on her children.

The Courtesan’s Lover has an engaging structure. Each significant character (including those reluctantly omitted here to avoid spoiling the story), has chapters written from his or her point of view in the ‘third person’. But Francesca narrates her story in the ‘first person’, present tense. This can be a challenging device for a writer, and for a reader, but in Gabrielle Kimm’s skilful hands it draws us effortlessly into Francesca’s inner thoughts as we wriggle into her tight bodices, dribble the juicy peaches she is so fond of, romp with her clients, and feel her emotional turmoil when her world begins to disintegrate.

Gabrielle Kimm’s writing glows with vivid and original imagery. Dialogue is ‘overheard’ rather than read. For all the tension and realism of a life balanced “over a swamp” this is ultimately a story of forgiveness and redemption. Those who enjoyed His Last Duchess will delight even more in The Courtesan’s Lover.

The Courtesan’s Lover (2011), ISBN 978-0-7515-4455-8, is published by Sphere, an imprint of Little, Brown Book Group. You can learn more about Gabrielle Kimm and her books by visiting her period website at: www.gabriellekimm.co.uk

 

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5 Things I learnt as an E-book Author: Masks of the Moryons

”Wow! Oh wow!” That’s what my publisher said when he saw the illustrations for my ‘BiteSize Travel’ e-book, Masks of the Moryons. It’s released today and I want to share with you the active learning process it has been for me.

Publishing the e-way is still a new experience for many authors and would-be authors; it was for me, and there are five important lessons I can share with you. Masks of the Moryons is a non-fiction book, but the processes and caveats that follow apply to any genre.

  1. Self-publishing is not the only alternative to the ‘traditional publishing’ route. Many writers choose self-publishing as their favoured option; some best-selling main stream authors are opting for self-publishing in e-formats, both for their back-lists and new works, and a few best-selling self-published e-book authors are going in the opposite direction and taking up contracts with mainstream publishers. The choices are open, but they all have different costs.

I didn’t want to go the self-publishing route because I’d rather spend my time writing than learning how to become a one-person publishing and marketing business. My choice for Masks of the Moryons was an independent e-publisher on the point of expanding his lists and the formats for distribution. I submitted a proposal to Collca, http://collca.com and it was accepted.

2. You don’t necessarily need an agent: the number of independent publishers willing to work directly with authors is increasing. First time authors or inexperienced writers may well benefit from the professional support and guidance of an agent, but these are the very people who are finding it hardest to attract one.

You do, however, need an editor unless you are confident in your own editing skills. Most small publishers do not have the capacity for extensive editorial services, so if editing is not your forte, hire an editor. The fact that e-publishing is cheaper, quicker and technically easier than print publishing does not mean that the writing is quicker and easier. There are no short cuts to the production of a good, clean MS, and putting out a book full of typos and tortuous grammar will do more harm to your reputation than remaining unpublished.

3. You need to find an e-publisher that handles your genre, but research possible publishing companies carefully: there are rogues and spivs here as in any service industry. Check that they don’t expect their authors to pay reading fees, conversion fees or any other fees. Look at their website to see how good they are at promoting their authors and titles, whether they have a proper submission procedure, and how prompt and helpful they are at responding when contacted. Any reputable publisher will list their titles and authors; my publisher also provides author profiles on his website – here is mine for example   http://collca.com/TrishNicholson  

When you find a publisher that seems to be right for your work, contact one or more of their authors and ask them about their experience. Check-out where the books are distributed – Masks of the Moryons will be distributed to around 85 e-book retailers, you need the same exposure for your own work. Read the on-line descriptions and reviews, and a few of the books themselves to see what the e-conversion quality is like. And before you commit yourself, ask how royalties are calculated: there are significant differences between publishes. I am paid half of what Collca receives from the retailers without any further deductions.

4.Write appropriately for the medium.  You don’t need to have technical knowledge of conversions for different electronic devices, but some simple text formatting habits will make the process easier for yourself and your publisher. Because Masks of the Moryons was being published for smaller formats like Blackberry and iPhone as well as for Kindle and e-readers, I kept paragraphs fairly short, up to 100 words. The text was justified; Word automatic paragraph settings were used for consistent indents; pre-set chapter heading and sub-heading styles were selected so I could use the automatic ‘table of contents’ tab, and I ensured there were no hanging spaces at the end of paragraphs. (These pests are created if you click spaces after a period at the end of a paragraph before pressing ‘enter’ for a new line. Always press ‘enter’ immediately after a period).

5.You need to participate in marketing and promoting your book. This is not just a feature of e-publishing or smaller publishers: all publishers these days expect their authors to be able to identify their readers (as a group), be available for publicity and promotional events, and have a presence on social media – website, Twitter account, and/or other media platforms such as Facebook and Google+

To be effective, the emphasis in social media is on the ‘social’. My personal preference is Twitter. Start a Twitter account and start to relate positively with other users well before you have a book to sell. There is a huge amount of mutual support among writers on Twitter, people respond to genuine interaction. It is self-defeating to open a social media account and immediately bombard people you’ve never even ‘spoken’ to with links to your Amazon location and demands to ‘check out my book’.

 Our websites, too, need to be more than a virtual shop: they should be updated with useful, informative or entertaining material to offer users something worth their time in browsing there. And yes, I am taking this opportunity to promote Masks of the Moryons, but I hope I have given you something useful in exchange for your attention.

6. I said five, but this is the bonus point: it can be huge fun – all of it. The whole process of publishing tends to be speeded up when it’s electronic, and if you choose your publisher well, you can be as involved as you want to be with every stage. I’m already drafting the next BiteSize Travel book!

Update: My second title in Collca’s BiteSize Travel series was released on 20 April 2012. Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon is a travelogue and has even more, original photographs. Further details, the preface, and access to e-retail outlets, can be found here: http://collca.com/jib

 

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Travel Tales of Mogpog 1

Yes, there really is a town called Mogpog.  Mabuhay! – Welcome!

Mogpog, on the Island of Marinduque in the Philippines, is where Masks of the Moryons is set. It is the only place in the Philippines (or anywhere else for that matter), where you can see the original traditions of the Longinus legend re-enacted throughout Easter Week:  called Moryonan. The Moryons have been roaming Mogpog in their spectacular masks and costumes to carry out their rituals of penance (panata) as part of the Moryonan for almost 150 years.

This is the first in a series of blog posts to share with you some extra tales of Mogpog traditions.

This Travel Tale of Mogpog is about the Mogpog Band

The towns own band plays at all the processions and parades during Moryonan, but also at the town Fiesta (which is in May), for Christmas events and any festive occasions when music is needed.

The Mogpog Band was started in the early 1900s by a member of the local Livelo family, but its reputation goes beyond the Island of Marinduque.

(Photo: courtesy of Senen Livelo)

In this photograph, taken in 1950, the band was asked to play in the town of Pola, in the neighbouring island of Mindoro to help celebrate fiesta. In the middle row, second from the left is Senen Livelo, on his left is his father who founded the band, and his father, Ignacio Livelo, started the first school in Mogpog in 1850. A nipa (native material) hut on their plot was divided into two areas: music was taught in one, the Spanish alphabet in the other. Ignacio’s wife, her two sisters and their husbands, all played musical instruments in the church.

Forty-seven years on, in 1997, Senen Livelo and a few of the band members, some in their eighties, are holding a jam session in the Livelo compound in Mogppog.

 

 

Other members, playing in the town during that same year.

 

Ignacio Livelo’s descendent, Senen Livelo Jnr., the Honourable Mayor of Mogpog Municipality, maintains the family’s musical traditions by playing the old folk songs and dances on the keyboard.

Mogpog Brass Band has now grown in size, has smart red uniforms, and plays in other places as well as Mogpog, including at the annual Feast of Black Nazarene in Quiapo, a district in the old part of Manila City. Click the link below to see them on a Youtube video.

http://www.youtube.com/embed/gPqVjQZJ3rM?rel=0

You can read more about Mogpog and Moryonan in  Masks of the Moryons – a BiteSize Travel e-book – by clicking this link to the publisher, Collca,  http://collca.com/motm

 

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Travel Tales of Mogpog 2

This second tale of Mogpog, the setting of travel ebook, Masks of the Moryons, is about a very important section of society – women. Women can be Moryons, too; masks with feminine features are carved especially for them.

“Society Ladies of Mogpog”

Living in Mogpog, working on my research, I met many wonderful, generous people, especially older Mogpogueños with fascinating memories of the past. Chief among them were my hosts, who asked me to address them as Ate, and TatayTagalog for ‘elder sister’, and ‘father’, respectively. They were, and still are, ‘my Mogpog family’.

One of the people they introduced me to was Leonida, the gracious elderly lady who gave me a copy of this photograph of Mogpog’s influential ladies taken around 1920. Some of their expressions are uncharacteristically grave because photography was a serious and expensive business; they would have been told to ‘keep still’ for the camera.

Such is the cultural continuity in this most traditional of towns that more than 70 years after this photograph of an earlier generation was taken, Leonida knew all their names. How many of us could name the sepia ghosts haunting the pages of our old family albums – if we still have them? I won’t list them fully because their descendents may not want that, but they include Christian names like Marciana, Teofila, Epifania, Eusebia, Alejandra, Concordia and Expectacia – names with the poetic resonance of a bygone era.

It amazes me that in a sticky tropical climate and at a time when laundry was by hand, when there was no electricity, transport was mostly by carabao (buffalo) cart, and wrinkle-free fabrics were not yet invented, these ladies were so impeccably ‘turned out’.

For everyday wear, clothes were made of a local cloth called sinamay (woven from abaca, banana leaf fibre) but for these heavily starched formal dresses, well-off families would acquire silks, brocades and fancy trimmings from China. Chinese traders have plied the coasts and islands of the Philippines for the last 2000 years.

The traditional dress of Filipinas – the baro’t saya – is a full skirt and loose-fitting long-sleeved blouse. These ladies are wearing the formal, and matching, version of this known as the maria clara: named after the main character in the classic Philippine novel, Noli Me Tangere, written in 1890 by Dr Jose Rizal. Rizal became a national hero for his role in the revolution against colonial rule; he was executed by Spanish authorities in 1896. Today, the maria clara has morphed into the terno: made of anything from simple silk to gem-encrusted brocade, it remains an icon of Filipina femininity, worn, for example, by Imelda Marcos – the lady with the shoes.

The ‘elite ladies’ in our photograph may have lived in houses as grand as this must once have been – a judge used to live here – or in something more modest,

but they were pillars of society, members of lay religious groups, caring for the santo figures in the church, organising social and religious events, singing and playing music, giving hospitality – and no doubt roundly scolding the young and lesser relatives who carried out the household chores.

The role of women in Mogpog still centres on Church, family and community. During Moryonan, the two-hundred or so masked and costumed Moryons who roam the town and perform rituals in the church throughout Mahal na Araw (Easter Week), are provided with lunch and merienda (snacks) each day, prepared and cooked by local households.

But however much there is to be done in Mogpog, there is always time to exchange a little tsismis with a neighbour –

You can learn more about Mogpog and Moryonan in, Masks of the Moryons, A BiteSize travel e-book. More information is available at this link to the publisher, Collca, http://collca.com/motm and reviews can be read at both the Amazon.com and Amazon.co.uk sites.

And if you missed the first of these tales, about the Mogpog Band, you should find it by scrolling down.

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Travel Tales of Mogpog 3: Behind the Mask

What lies behind the masks of Mogpog? It was me behind this one; carved for me to wear as a penance during Moryonan – the Easter week re-enactment of the Longinus legend.

If you have been following these tales, you will know that Mogpog is a small town on Marinduque Island in the Philippines – and the subject of the BiteSize Travel ebook, Masks of the Moryons. This third tale is about the making and wearing of my mask.

My Moryon mask in bulaklakan style

Long gone are the days when an anthropologist had bearers to set out his canvas chair and pour his unavoidably sun-warmed claret while he observed the ‘natives’, interpreting their customs through the sieve of his own western culture. This on-the-spot empirical method was better than sitting at home imagining hairy little men with tails, as some earlier scholars had done, but was too close to ‘empire’ for long term credibility.

To understand other cultures we must experience them: participant observation is not the only method used but it is a key one. There are still those who insist one should go armed with a ‘theoretical framework’, but to me, a framework is simply a sieve with a different name: time enough to look at theories when I have data to think with. So I went unarmed, to live with a local family kind enough to tolerate my daily mangling of their mother tongue, and generous enough to share their traditions. That is how I came to wear the mask in Moryonan.

There are two different styles of mask. In this photograph are the Roman masks, depicting Roman soldiers during Jesus’ arrest and Crucifixion. Women can be Romans (though not many choose to), but ‘my family’ supported my wish to wear the original, bulaklakan mask, worn since the first Moryonan in the 1860s.

 

Bulaklakan is Tagalog for ‘covered in flowers’: it is the headpiece – the turbante – that bears flowers, traditionally seven and usually made of coloured foil. Having made our decision, I was taken to one of the best carvers in town to place my order and be measured up. The impressive result is the mask shown at the top of the page. It is as close as possible to the oldest mask still in use, which was made in Mogpog in 1945. Do you see the little pinwheel in the centre of the turbante? – It twirls in the breeze. That is traditional too, but no-one knows why.

Masks are carved by hand from a single block of local softwood called dap-dap (Erythrina subumbrans). Most Moryons make their own masks, but sometimes another Moryon will make the turbante for them. This mask has been carved and sanded, ready for painting.

During Moryonan, bulaklakan Moryons represent the Pharisees and others who betrayed Jesus of Nazareth in the Passion story. When not taking part in rituals inside the church, or accompanying processions of saints, Moryons roam the town each day during Easter week as a panata – a vow of penance.

I can attest to the validity of the penance. When wearing a full mask – covering also the ears and extending under the chin – it is difficult to see through the two tiny wide-apart eye-holes; difficult to breathe only through the narrow slit in the mouth, and becomes hot and heavy in humid tropical heat.

Here I am on the left, feeling like a boiled lemon, with a make-do red shift and a borrowed spear, waiting for a parade to start.

The inside of the mask is not sanded and painted but left rough where the wood was chiselled out: where it chafes, your skin stings and itches when sweat pours down your face. Instinctively, you raise your hand to your cheek, feel inanimate wood and realise you can do nothing about it – such are the sacrifices of a dedicated anthropologist.

In recent years a new style of turbante – the artistic bulaklakan – has become popular. All manner of creative materials are used to make these, including moss, woven string, seed pods, feathers, and even empty Nescafe sachets. (I’ll show you more of these in my next Tale).

 

 

What happened to my magnificent Moryon mask? Ritual masks are not souvenirs; they are significant cultural artefacts. I was reluctant to take it too far from its cultural context, but wary of causing ripples by giving it to one Moryon rather than another – they had all been so encouraging and helpful in my panata – so I gifted it to the Anthropology Department at the University of the Philippines, where I was studying for my PhD. I hope it is still there.

To learn more about Mogpog and Moryonan, read Masks of the Moryons, available from Amazon.com, Amazon.co.uk and other retail outlets, or see further details from the publisher, Collca, through this link: http://collca.com/motm

 

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Travel Tales of Mogpog 4: More on Masks

We’ve been making masks for thousands of years. Why?  Masks conceal, but they also reveal, transform and share – they are metaphors. Our minds are made of metaphors.

In this fourth Tale of Mogpog, the town in the Philippines where the masked Moryons re-enact the Legend of Longinus during Easter Week, I share the deeper meaning of masks, and why they are so important to us.

The earliest known mask was carved from stone around 7000 BC in the Middle East. It would have been heavy to wear and might have been a burial mask. They used the most permanent medium available to them, that is why we still have it. But masks are more often made from perishable materials: the Inuit use animal skins, bone and feathers; in Papua New Guinea they carve masks from wood or weave them from vines, fibres and leaves.  None of these materials last long enough to be found by archaeologists – we could have been making masks for 50,000 years, 100,000 years.

We are all familiar with metaphors, used by artists and writers. A metaphor hides an idea or image by covering it with another that reveals its meaning in a new way. It transforms the original idea into something deeper, clearer, because the metaphor links directly to ideas and experiences already in our own minds. The idea that was hidden and transformed is still there, of course, underneath, because metaphors allow us to appreciate more than one idea simultaneously. And so it is with masks, as we shall see.

But not only artists and writers, we all use metaphors, all the time. Our brains are structured to process information as stories, we think in narrative; it is part of our in-built capacity for language. We evolved language because we are social beings: we need to understand others, to relate, co-operate, or disagree with them.

But before we could do any of these things, we had to become aware of ourselves, and others, as independent conscious beings with different – sometimes conflicting – intentions and needs. We developed a sense of personal identity, and became aware of an inner reality – our own – alongside an outer reality in which we have to operate.

Without conscious awareness and language we would have remained smarter-than-the-average Great Apes rather than become human. But it posed a dilemma: how to resolve the inner and outer worlds with their spiritual, physical and social dimensions, and make sense of them? What did it all mean? And what should we do about it?

Given our predisposition to think in stories, it should be no surprise that our ancestors sought and shared meaning through myths, rituals and symbolic objects – including masks, although masks do more than simply ‘stand for’ another identity.

Masks are used in some form in almost every culture. Details of their structure and purpose are specific to the peoples that created them, but there are common elements.

Like a metaphor, a mask conceals the wearer inside it, while revealing something greater on the outside for others to see and experience. The inside and the outside exist together – a paradox – because onlookers know it is a masked figure, but at the same time they know and experience the outer reality that is expressed through the mask. As in fiction, writers use unreality to reveal deeper truths and other states: we know they are made-up stories, but we are still affected emotionally by them; we accept the revelations of a story without believing it is literally true.

Perhaps even more significantly, masks both create and show a transformation. Whether in identity, social status, or spiritual awareness, there is always a transformation in the mask wearer, and sometimes in those who witness it. Like any good story there is always someone or something that changes. No change, no story.

In Moryonan, the re-enactment of the Christian Passion, the masks worn by Moryons have several purposes. At the core is the panata, the vow to wear the mask. This is no casual commitment, the same word is used for taking religious vows.

Moryons are penitents – the masks are extremely uncomfortable to wear, and part of their role is to be publicly ridiculed – but just as often, Moryons wear the mask as an expression of gratitude for restored health, or the granting of some other request made through the saints.

Moryons are ridiculed and jeered at because they also represent Pharisees, Romans and other enemies of Jesus of Nazareth. This is both part of the penance, and part of re-enacting the events of the Passion, the story that takes place day by day in the town of Mogpog, witnessed by the community.

At one level, Moryons change their identity to play their role in the Passion story, at another, their transformation is one of personal spiritual renewal. The key transformation during Moryonan is the conversion of the Roman Centurion – Longinus – to a Christian martyr. A spiritual experience for Longinus, but also for the community that witnesses the foundation of their faith played out in real time around the familiar spaces of their town.

But Moryons are not as sombre as all this may seem. They also prance and dance in colourful burlesque as they roam the streets each day. They attract attention and provide amusement – another vehicle for the message. 

This post has got a bit philosophical, so I’d better explain that although the ebook, Masks of the Moryons, has sections on the difference between ritual and theatre, and the effects of tourism on culture, it is not a book of theory: it is an experience. I take you into the community in Mogpog to know Moryonan as a participant; to understand how it feels and what it means to wear the mask.

Masks of the Moryons is available from Amazon, and other ebook retailers, or you can find further information at my publisher, Collca http://collca.com/motm

 

Have you seen the other Tales of Mogpog? You can scroll down to read them.

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Women Trading

It is customary to haggle over price … a little,

It is part of their dignity as traders,

They are not beggars.

They have worked to grow, collect, make, package, or carry their wares, to sell them.

They may not have access to fair credit to buy the goods they trade: they may start in debt with high interest to pay from their sales

They are often the sole breadwinner for their extended families. And it is not always ‘surplus’ that they sell, but family heirloom crafts, if that is all they have.

Time spent selling in markets or roadsides is time away from their children, from the care of the sick and elderly, from their community role or from their family vegetable plot – if they have one: their time is of value.

It is not true that traders never accept a price that doesn’t give them some profit.

Some are so poor they have to accept any cash price at all, however low, in order to buy a bowl of rice, or a sweet potato, or an onion, to feed their family today – tomorrow is another matter.

It is customary to haggle over price … a little …

Women, trading, give us:

 Food or drink we need in the market

souvenirs we take home

photographs for our magazines, albums and blogs

the ambience of our exotic holidays

their smile of welcome

their hope

It is customary to haggle over price … a little … just a little … but be careful not to beat them down into perpetual poverty.

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Spinning on Two Wheels

Mashed up pumpkin was down my tee shirt, on the carpet, even on the wall. “I’ll leave you two to sort it out, Jason.” Mum laughed as she went off to work. I guess she remembers how it used to be.

***

I’d only been back from the spinal unit a few days – lots of new stuff to handle and I couldn’t cut it. When you’re dead from the waist down your guts don’t work properly; you plan ‘bowel days’ and dose up the day before. It had worked. I was expected to be pleased.  “I couldn’t do anything right before, now I get six bloody gold stars for shitting on time.” I was yelling like a rousie, enjoying the power of my voice bouncing off the ceiling. She winced and bit her lip. I wanted to hurt her: I hated myself for that. She was my Mum for Christ’s sake. She got up nights to turn me so I wouldn’t get pressure sores – like some decrepit old geezer – and then did everything else for me during the day. Why didn’t she shout back? She used to give a good enough tongue-lashing before the accident.

           I don’t think Mum knew quite what to do with me. No problem with the practical side; she’d given up her part-time job at the old people’s home to be my carer, but where was the tough hug “get-that-mess-out-of-here” mum? She would’ve shifted a mountain if it got in your way but she didn’t take any lip and you wouldn’t want a passing clip from those powerful hands. Now, it was like putting your foot on the brake and finding no resistance: I hit the wall too often. I hated her for being like that, doing what she had to do. I hated myself. I had plenty of hate to go round, and to spare.

I broke off with my girlfriend – well, fiancé – we were supposed to get hitched in October. I knew Trace still came round to see Mum. I heard their low voices nattering in the kitchen. I didn’t care. I didn’t want to see her. What was the point?

Dad was the only one who didn’t get my shit. He’s a builder, runs a few steers on the property too. In the house he’s a calm presence; big – fills the doorway but it’s all muscle – and quiet. He never wastes words; takes what comes. He does whatever is needed – lifting, pushing, fixing, with no more than, “OK, Son?”  He’s like a roof truss, Dad. Stops the whole shambles falling in. I know a bit about roof trusses – I’d just got my chippy’s certificate before hell came knocking.

I wonder no-one ever said, “It’s your own bloody fault, Jason.” Because in a way it was, but knowing that didn’t help.  The irony is it was going to be my last stint on the speedway. Mum hated me driving at meets and usually had a go at me beforehand. Trace never said much but didn’t go with me. Anyway, I’d decided to give it away. It’s not cheap, and we were saving for a deposit. Trace was working harder at it than I was and that didn’t seem right. But I was determined to have a final race to remember and I’d got my eager mitts on a super production – a WRX Subaru – the sideways, on-boost cornering of that car is really something else. The track was dry, hard, and fast, and I still don’t know how we got into a three car pile-up. Talk about carnage. The other two lucky buggers walked away. They said it was a freak accident. Yeah, freak is what I felt like.

They let me leave the spinal unit earlier than usual because I wasn’t responding, co-operating or whatever. There were people there worse off, it’s not that I thought I was the only one with a problem; I’m not that much of a dick-head. They tried to give me counselling but pain shared is pain doubled as far as I can see. I was glad to be home but I was a real mess for a while, despite all the drugs – post trauma something or other they said. Dad had already made alterations in the house – widened doorways, put in ramps, grip bars – a wheelchair changes your whole environment.

 But things improved once I started rehab. The trainer was Bennie – a real hard case. He’d been a rugby coach and took no shit from anyone. His favourite saying was, “Get to know your body, if anything moves, use it, be it only two fingers.”

According to the doc it could have been worse. “You’ve sustained a C7 injury, a crushed vertebra.” he said, “It’s causing compression on the spinal chord but it’s not severed –that’s something.” In plain language, I couldn’t move my legs: no-one was sticking their necks out to say whether I ever would. Bennie worked on strengthening my upper body and trying to get back some confidence. It was proving a hard slog but as the weeks went by I felt my body, at least, was beginning to get somewhere.

Then one day Trace walked into the living room. I knew it was her because I’d seen her car turning into the drive. I was sitting in my wheelchair watching a video and didn’t turn around.

“What do you want, Trace?” I hadn’t yet made much progress as a reasonable human being – still rejecting everything to do with my old life though I hadn’t found a new one. Being Trace, she rode out my welcome and I can’t remember what was said at first – not a lot. I’d destroyed what we had; made us almost strangers. We’d been going out since high school; went everywhere together and shared a wacky sense of humour. We even looked alike; tall and big-boned, the same dark, curly hair that was out of control most of the time. There’d never been anyone else: she was the best. But I felt like dead meat then. It changed everything. Then she started on about the wedding. The RSA hall had been booked a while back – you had to do that, it was a popular venue.

I still didn’t look up from the screen, “Well, you can bloody cancel it.”

“I can cancel the wedding, Jason, no problem, but I’m not cancelling the baby.”

I spun the chair round and looked at her. Jesus Christ. I couldn’t even stand and she was throwing a kid at me. I hadn’t seen her for months; I hadn’t known and I couldn’t take it.

“Mine, is it?”

Without a word, Trace pitched across the room and slapped my face. I must have just stared at her, because after a while she said, “I’ll leave you to think it through, Jason.” and let herself out through the range slider. I watched her get into her old Colt and drive off. She must have come straight from work; she was still wearing her blue jacket from the pharmacy.

That was a bloody terrible thing to say. I could have cut out my tongue. I hadn’t meant it. I was just kicking out – yeah, right.

Truth is, that would have been the best news going before I became such a useless pillock.

 I was so pathetic during rehab that afternoon Bennie knew something was up.

“What’s the matter with you, Jason, you’ve not got both oars in the water, mate?”  I spilled out the whole story. He looked at me hard for a while, nodded and said, “Right, grab the bar, Jason, lift your arse out of that chair, you’ve got a big game coming up.”

The following day I saw Trace parking in the yard – Mum went out to feed the chooks. Before she was hardly through the door, I was spinning my wheels towards her, “Jeez, Trace, look I’m sorry, I didn’t mean–”

“I know that J, that’s why I slapped you – to wake up the real Jason, and I’m not sorry.” She laughed; so did I. I’d almost forgotten how. I asked her about the baby. I was still getting my head around that – our own kid. “Two more months…we’ll work it out together, Jason.”

            It was a bit scary, wondering how we’d manage everything, but I felt like I’d won the first division prize.

***

 That feels like yonks ago, and now I’ve got young Tobi on my knees, trying to shovel mushy food into his mouth. He spits it out and throws it around – thinks it’s all a game. He’s a lively little sprog – my son.

           I still train with Bennie: nobody’s promising I can chuck the chair one day, but as Bennie says, “Cut out the dags first, mate.”

We haven’t done the wedding thing yet. I want to stand beside Trace for that.

[Spinning on Two Wheels was a finalist in the H.E.Bates (UK) , and the South Island Writers Association (NZ) short story competitions in 2011, and first appeared in their competition anthologies.]

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How the Brothers Grimm Came to Write Fairy Tales

To celebrate the birthday of Wilhelm Grimm (24 February1786), this is the tale of how Wilhelm and his brother Jacob came to write the fairy tales that fed our childish imaginations.  It is also the 200th anniversary of their first published collection in 1812: Children’ and Household Tales (Kinder-und Hausmärchen).

Once upon a time, in the German village of Hanau, there was an honest and hard-working lawyer called Philipp Wilhelm Grimm. Although not high-born, so well respected was he that the ruling aristocracy appointed him a judge.

Philipp and his wife Dorothea had nine children: one girl and eight boys, though three of their sons died in infancy as often happened in those days. Being only eight years between the youngest and eldest of the surviving Grimm children, they all enjoyed each other’s company, but Jacob and Wilhelm were special friends; they were inseparable.

Their temperaments were different and they complemented each other. Jacob, older than Wilhelm by one year, liked to know where things came from and how they worked; he always had his head in a book. Wilhelm, a delicate child, liked stories and music, and was more convivial than his brother.

And then in 1796, when Jacob, the eldest of the children, was 11-years old, their father died. The family drew even closer together to cope with this tragedy. But Dorothea was determined to give her eldest sons a good education despite their financial straits, and she knew the only way to do that was to send them away.

Jacob and Wilhelm went to live with their aunt, Henrietta Zimmer, in their mother’s home town of Kassel, where Henrietta was lady-in-waiting to the princess of Hessia-Kassel. They attended the best high school, but they were now the sons of a poor widow; there was little hope they would follow their father’s footsteps in studying law: only the elite could enter university.

For four long years the brothers worked assiduously at their studies. Jacob coached Wilhelm with his science homework; Wilhelm helped Jacob with his compositions.

In fact, they graduated at the top of their classes. Aunt Henrietta was so impressed, she asked the princess to appeal to the king on the boys’ behalf. The kind-hearted princess did so, and a special disposition allowed Jacob to enter Marburg University in 1802, Wilhelm a year later.

Jacob was lonely at first, but once Wilhelm joined him they revelled in the academic life, studying even harder as those without birthright often do, reading widely and taking an interest in everything that was going on.

And a lot was happening during that time. It was known as the Romantic Era, not because everyone fell in love, although they did in a way, as we shall see.

It all started with the French Revolution. Privileged people of the previous century had insisted upon rigid conduct, rational thought, and knowing ones place in the social order which, for most of the people, was at the bottom. But the ideals of personal liberty and equality that spawned the Revolution had cast a spell on scholars all over Europe.

In England, Samuel Coleridge and William Wordsworth wrote a collection of poems called Lyrical Ballads, which included The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, and Kublai Khan; it was full of non-rational emotions and delightfully imaginative nonsense. Shelley and Byron wrote of the ecstasies and agonies of falling in love.

Meanwhile, Walter Scott was probing his roots with historical novels of heroic clan chieftains and distressed maidens. Traditions of villagers and peasants were sought after; these were the old ballads and stories – the folklore that now inspired young intellectuals with fraternity, if not actual equality.

And at their university desks, Jacob and Wilhelm listened to their professor, Friedrich Carl von Savigny, who said the essence of law could be understood only by knowing ancient customs and language. Equally spellbound, the brothers read Ludwig Tieck and the Schlegel brothers on the origins of German culture and literature when they should have been studying jurisprudence. Our heroes were not careless sons and nephews however. While they began collecting folk tales they continued their legal education, but before this was put to the test, tragedy struck once more.

Fate took the life of Dorothea Grimm, leaving orphaned her fifteen-year-old daughter, Charlotte, and three young sons still at home.

Jacob, responsible for supporting his family, worked as a librarian in Kassel where Wilhelm joined him later. Together, with the full resources of the library at their bidding, they soon added to their collection of Märchen (folk tales). By 1812, the Brothers Grimm published their first modest collection of 86 folk tales, followed by 70 more two years later. By 1818 they published two volumes of Deutsche Sagen (German Legends) – 585 of them; demonstrating scholarship that won them both honorary doctorates from their old university.

Even when Wilhelm married his childhood friend, Dortchen Wild, he and Jacob continued the same pace of work. Gathering tales was a family activity: Dortchen and the Wild family had long been a well-spring of stories, so had the Hassenpflugs, the family that Charlotte later married into, and young brother Ludwig, then studying art, painted the illustrations for their tales.

Groups of friends and neighbours gathered to pass-on stories they had heard from their nursemaids, their servants, or from aged relatives – story themes known in many forms all over Europe.

The brothers still complemented each other: Jacob focused a little more on linguistics and medieval research, while Wilhelm moulded different versions and excerpts of oral tales, or those found in the rare old books they collected, and re-fashioned them into literary form with a distinctive ‘storytelling’ style. Sometimes this meant switching plots, changing incidents, or even characters, and knitting different stories into one. Calvinist morality and patriarchy of the times underpinned the editing process, for their fairy tales, fables and legends were intended to educate as well as to entertain.

Inevitably, there is something of Wilhelm’s own nature in the stories he polished that might, for example, explain why he changed Snow White’s jealous mother into a step-mother. Is there such a thing as an original or ‘pure’ folk tale? To some degree is not each a product of every storyteller through the centuries?

And these were turbulent times. Napoleon had challenged most of Europe; German principalities fought over territory while rival factions within their borders competed for power, and everywhere, discontent bubbled-up among the workers, peasants and dispossessed youth.

The Brothers Grimm, too, had their struggles. Lack of high connections and political patronage denied Jacob the promotion he had earned at the royal library in Kassler. They both resigned at the cost of more financial difficulties.

But eventually, in the city of Göttingen, in the Kingdom of Hannover, their true value was recognised: Jacob was offered a professorship of old German literature and became head librarian; Wilhelm was appointed librarian, becoming a professor later. During these productive years, the brothers continued jointly publishing folk tales, but also pursued their specialist subjects: Jacob’s on German grammar and ancient German language and law; Wilhelm’s on old ballads and Teutonic heroic legends. They focused on their teaching and studies, unaware of another event arising from the times and about to challenge them.

Now it happened that a new king came to the throne of Hannover. His name was King Ernst August ll. Intent on crushing any ideas of liberty and equality that had wrecked the French aristocracy, this king abolished the constitution, dissolved parliament, and required all state employees to swear an oath of allegiance to his personal authority. He would wield absolute power in the land. Prominent people, afraid to lose their privileges, complained from behind their hands or in closed rooms.

Only seven brave men spoke out in protest – the Brothers Grimm among them. Forced to flee before the king’s wrath and banned from other principalities that feared the king, they returned to Kassler, finding themselves again in dire circumstances.

In life, sometimes we have to take decisions on matters of principle, or for the sake of the future, even though we seem to lose much in the present. Fate often has a way of redressing the balance.

Jacob and Wilhelm began work on the massive task of compiling a German etymological dictionary. It earned them little, but for three years they stuck at their labours in characteristic fashion.

Then another new king, in another kingdom, Frederick Wilhelm IV of Prussia, offered the Grimms research professorships at the Academy of Sciences in Berlin. Here the brothers flourished. And eight years later, when Germany, too, had its revolution – though not as bloody as that in France – both Jacob and Wilhelm were elected to the new National Assembly. But the principalities would not come together and democracy could not take root. Revolution fizzled out.

The Brothers Grimm retired from both politics and academia to focus on their other work, especially the dictionary. It was a monumental undertaking that sought to trace the origin of every German word: the first volume, published in 1854, contained 1,824 pages and that was only up to the word Biermolke.

Wilhelm died in 1859. Jacob, utterly bereft without the companion of his life, continued to work on the dictionary until his death four years later. Between them they had only reached the letter F, but later scholars built on their foundations.

And their fairy tales lived happily ever after.

 

Source of biographical facts: (1)  http://www.pitt.edu/~dash/grimm.html which has a full list of all the Grimm’s published works and links to electronic texts and many related sites. (2) The Complete Fairy Tales, translated and annotated by Jack Zipes (Vintage Books 2007). It includes a number of stories found among the Grimm’s correspondence not yet edited and polished by them: a useful insight into their editing process. The book also contains a list of all the people who contributed tales to the Grimm’s collection – none of whom were peasants.

A note on writing this post:

A few months ago I posted a piece called ‘Give Me A Cue’ (it’s under Category: writing), in which I suggested the use of Gerald Masters’ Book of Days as a source of inspiration for topical articles. Earlier this week I was stuck for a blog post topic, so I followed my own advice and discovered today was Wilhelm’s birthday – the rest is a ‘fairy tale’. It is probably too long for a blog post, but I was having too much fun to wield the hatchet.

 

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Montserrat

Pinnacle of spiritual aspirations and battle ground of cultural identity: Montserrat is a story of religion, politics, war, arts and letters – the lifeblood of Catalunya.

Long before powerful men felt entitled to own mountains, perhaps 5,000 years ago, hunters and gatherers left the caves of Montserrat where they had lived, and began to grow food on the plains below. During the day, their descendants looked up from their fields at the crazy, serrated peaks; at night they repeated around their hearths stories and legends about them handed down from their ancestors. They gave these astonishing rock formations names like La Mòmia (the mummy), La Monieta (the little mummy), and La Trompa de l’Elefant (the elephant’s trunk).

The jumble of peaks rises to 4,000 feet; some look like praying hands, others like accusing fingers. Technically, they own the ugly name of ‘conglomerate’ – pebbles, sand and clay held together in a natural cement of limestone – materials laid down when these mountains were lowlands covered in water (a long, long time ago). Easily eroded by sun, wind, rain and frost, crests were rounded and smoothed, chasms opened between them 100 metres in depth, and caves are numerous, some 500 metres deep, pillared with stalagmites and stalactites. (A note for those who can’t remember the difference: ‘tites’ come down, ‘mites’ go up).

The earliest written records of Montserrat concern one Wilfred The Hairy, a Catalan noble whose name in that language is Guifré el Pilós. Guifré’s army drove out the Moors in 875 AD, enabling him to become the first count of Barcelona. His suzerainty included Montserrat, 30 miles to the west, but as it was already a site of pilgrimage with four hermitages, he donated it to Ripoll, the Benedictine monastery which he founded in the north of Catalunya. And so began the uneasy marriage between politics and religion that led to centuries of domestic strife.

Ripoll was too far away to bother with the hermitages until 1025 AD, when the grandson of Wilfred The Hairy, Oliba Cabreta, was elected abbot of Ripoll and sent a contingent of monks to Montserrat to establish the first Benedictine monastery at the hermitage of Santa Maria. The monastery flourished, especially after the cult of Our Lady of Montserrat began to attract donations and pilgrims from all over Europe in search of miracles – a pre-occupation of The Middle Ages.

Our Lady of Montserrat, or  Moroneta (‘dark woman’), the Black Madonna is a Romanesque wooden statue of Madonna and child whose origins are cloaked in legend – carved by Saint Luke and carried to Montserrat by Saint Peter – but actually dates from the 12th century. The Madonna’s face and hands are brown: pragmatists say the varnish has darkened from age and candle smoke, but you are free to believe she was made in the likeness of the dark and beautiful woman depicted in the Song of Songs – an Old Testament story known also as the Song of Solomon, or the Canticles.

Success finally led to independence from Ripoll as well as recognition from high places. When Christopher Columbus sailed the ocean blue to the Americas, the Papal Legate who accompanied him was Bernard Baïl, a former monk at Montserrat. The Master printer, Johannes Luschner was brought from Germany to set up one of the earliest printing presses for the monastery’s own publishing house – Abadia de Montserrat – and a new church was consecrated in 1592. It had taken 32 years to build – hardly surprising in that terrain.

But politics and the outside world could not be denied: the spiritual importance of Montserrat and the culture of Catalunya had to survive the oppression of Ferdinand and Isabel of Spain in the 15th century; the two more centuries of turmoil and power struggles that followed; Napoleon’s sacking of the buildings in 1812; the Civil War of the 1930s – in which 23 monks lost their lives, their tombs are in the crypt of the Basilica, and further oppression during the Franco regime until its downfall in 1975.

Franco visited Montserrat several times and usually followed the custom of kissing the hand of the Madonna. According to Michael Eaude (Catalonia: a cultural history), while Hitler met with Franco in an unsuccessful bid for German troops to pass through Spain, Heinrich Himmler, his chief of Police, made a side-trip to Montserrat in pursuit of his obsession with the Holy Grail –  he probably ‘passed’ on kissing the Madonna, though.

Although Franco tried to outlaw the language, Mass at Montserrat was always said in Catalan. The iconic status of Montserrat held it in thrall to politics: during the 1960s and early1970s, it became a focus for international opposition to the regime, hosting an ‘occupation’ of artists and literary figures.

Over its turbulent history, necessitating recurrent renewal and reconstruction, Montserrat became synonymous with the regeneration of Catalan language, culture and identity – the Renaixença. And it continues still.

In a quiet corner among Montserrat’s trees, a bronze statue of one of the world’s greatest cellists marks his centenary in 1976. He was a Catalan, and in Wikipaedia acrid debate as to whether he should be listed first under his Catalan birth name of Pau Casals i Defilló, or the name more familiar to the rest of the world – Pablo Casals – continues to scroll down several pages. Pau means ‘peace’ in Catalan, and he was, indeed, awarded a Nobel Peace Prize. At the invitation of his friend U Thant, he wrote the music, to words by W.H. Auden, for a ‘Hymn to the United Nations’, conducting its first performance in New York in 1971, shortly before his 95th birthday. He died two years later in Puerto Rico where his mother was born, though of Catalan descent.

Eighty or so monks at Montserrat continue to lead lives of spiritual growth while offering hospitality and guidance to pilgrims. Many Catalan families make annual visits at Easter or during the summer holidays; religious and cultural groups hold events and retreats, and the Barcelona Football Club give thanks there for their triumphs. If you are lucky, the traditional Catalan dance, the sardana, may be performed in the square in front of the Basilica. I saw it on a Sunday morning in front of Barcelona cathedral.

Among the treasures of Montserrat is a library of a quarter of a million books and manuscripts, some extremely rare; a museum of Biblical archaeology, including Sumerian cuneiform tablets from 3,500 BC – the time and form of the tales of Gilgamesh, and a collection of original paintings, not only by Catalan artists such as Pablo Picasso and Dali, but el Greco, Monet, Degas, and Caravaggio’s Saint Jerome.

Another asset – a living treasure – is the Escolania, the boys’ choir and oldest conservatoire in the world: its earliest documented activities go back to the thirteenth century. To hear the choir sing Salve Regina, as it does every lunch time after Mass, is a high point of a visit to Montserrat that I was determined not to miss.

The square in front of the Basilica was crowded; queues extending the entire length of the square shuffled slowly through doors on either side of the main entrance, waiting their turn to kiss the hand of the Madonna at the back of the altar. I slipped through the main door of the Basilica, and became attached to a solid aggregate of people jammed into the back of the church, listening to the end of Mass and hoping to get into a pew to hear the choir. Being tall was an advantage: able to breathe air instead of hair, I used a well-tested method to make progress in that situation – leaning very gently into the person in front until my body heat forced them to inch forward. In this fashion I came to the back of the last pew, about hip height, but Mass was over: as people left their seats, others edged in at either end of the pew. Pressed on all sides, I could see myself trapped there.

So I confess: there was no excuse, it wasn’t panic; it was premeditated – I vaulted over the back of the pew, landing with a dull thud on the hard wooden seat. There were some sharp intakes of breathe and a few mumbles so I smiled and nodded at my nearest neighbours before focusing on the choir preparing to start. Indeed, you may be shocked, but without that little initiative, I would have been unable to bring you this photograph which you might not otherwise have seen.

If you would like to learn more about Pau Casals, his story was written down by Albert E. Kahn, Joys and Sorrows: Pablo Casals, His Own Story (1974) Touchstone Books/Simon and Schuster. Paperback.

And if you are interested in travel and photography, you might enjoy my latest travel ebook, Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan Trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, published by Collca on 20 April 2012. Available from Amazon and other ebook retailers.

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What is the future of the short story?

It was a rare treat to rootle around a good second-hand book shop last week and I came away with armfuls of treasure – and in dire need of more shelf-space.

One gem was H. E. Bates’, The Modern Short Story from 1809 to 1953, a fascinating ramble from Gogol to Lawrence, via Poe, Maupassant, Chekhov (Bates uses ‘Tchehov’), Tolstoy and a dozen others. Recognising that story’s history goes back a few thousand years, Bates justifies his starting date for the short story as the point at which it became a deliberately constructed art form, and the most difficult and exacting form of prose, but he has trouble settling on a definition.

To pragmatist H. G. Wells, the short story was defined as a half-hour read. For Poe, the meaning of every word – explicit or implied – must focus entirely on a pre-determined outcome. Fans of Chekhov will not be surprised by his opinion that stories should have no beginning or end – but I don’t think that means the first and last sentences are not critical; it is more to do with where, in the arc of the story, you begin, and letting readers tweak their imaginations.

Bates finds no definition entirely satisfactory because one of the strengths of the short story is its boundless flexibility, but he gives some delightful descriptions:

 ‘the short story has something of the indefinite and infinitely variable nature of a cloud…”

 and in more concrete terms:

 ‘To see a writer building up his tale, piece by piece, as one builds up a toy tower of match-sticks, and to feel that he knows instinctively and consciously which match-stick must be last and exactly when the tower will bear no more, is an experience which can become, also, a general critical test of form.’

But what interested me most were his comments on the relationship between the short story and film:

 ‘Mr. A. E. Coppard has long cherished the theory that short story and film are expressions of the same art, the art of telling a story by a series of subtly implied gestures, swift shots, moments of suggestion, an art in which elaboration and above all explanation are superfluous and tedious.’

And Bates wholeheartedly agrees:

 ‘Indeed the two arts have not only accelerated together but have, consciously or not, taught each other much. The scrap of dirty paper blown by wind along the empty morning street, a girl sewing, on a railway station, the tear in her lover’s jacket and he hiding it by holding up a suitcase, a mother staring dumbly at her returned gangster son – these tiny moments, seen as it were telescopically, brightly focused, unelaborated and unexplained, stamp swiftly on the mind the impressions of desolation, embarrassed love, or maternal despair. Each moment implies something it does not state; each sends out a swift brief signal on a certain emotional wave-length, relying on the attuned mental apparatus of the audience to pick it up.’

Writing the first edition of The Modern Short Story.., at the beginning of the Second World War, Bates noted that more, and better, short stories were being written in England and America than ever before; he was optimistic that the post-war period would provide a fruitful environment, as it had after the First World War: ‘if no other good comes out of wars, stories will.’

In looking for development in the arts, Bates emphasises the importance of context, of prevailing social and cultural conditions; given the extent and rapidity of change in the last twenty years, or even the last five, it provides significant insights into where the short story might be heading today:

A particular artistic form does not flourish in a particular age because of a happy accident, but because certain cultural, inventive, revolutionary, or popular forces combine to stimulate its growth: so that finally, perhaps, it becomes the most necessary and natural expression of the age.’

By the time Bates wrote a ‘Retrospect’ to his second edition (in 1971), the post-war resurgence of the short story he had hoped for had not happened. But he could not have foreseen the electronic revolution that has impacted both film and short fiction, in many ways bringing them closer together: the ubiquity of U-Tube, the emergence of e-zines, use of transmedia in storytelling, ease of publishing short stories as e-books, the huge popularity of flash fiction, and all the other ‘fast word’ outlets. Nor the perpetually-in-a hurry audience that is, perhaps, increasingly attuned to picking up the ‘brief signal on a certain emotional wave-length’.

Is the short story about to become the ‘most necessary and natural expression of the age’?

What do you think?

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Interview: Lorraine Mace aka Frances di Plino

Lorraine Mace is a columnist, editor, non-fiction author and writing tutor. Writing as Frances di Plino gives her the opportunity to allow the dark side of her personality to surface and take control. She also runs Flash 500 – flash fiction and humour verse competitions.

author Lorraine MaceTrish: Lorraine, welcome to my tree house. It is a great treat to have you here, and congratulations on the publication of Bad Moon Rising. A deep, psychological crime thriller – I think it’s your first fiction release? Why did you choose that genre?

Lorraine: It is indeed my first release, although not the first novel I’ve written. I’ve completed four novels for children, but this is the first for adults. I started the novel way back in the mists of time, shortly after the last dinosaur disappeared. I was reading a lot of crime back then, so it was natural to be drawn to the genre. I never got any further than the first three chapters, which I polished so often they shone, but couldn’t bring myself to get down to the hard slog of finishing the novel. In 2010 I finally forced myself to knuckle down. I’m now very glad I did!

Trish: What we all want to know is: how difficult was it to get Bad Moon Rising published? Had you already papered the loo with rejection slips?

 Lorraine: I only submitted Bad Moon Rising to two publishers. The first liked it enough for it to get quite a long way through the acquisition process, but declined in the end with a very complimentary letter of regret. The second, Crooked {Cat} Publishing, accepted it.

 Trish: That’s wonderful. So, what is your advice to others trying to get published?

 Lorraine: Don’t submit too soon. Join a peer review group (online or in real life), or pay to have your work professionally critiqued. Agents and publishers are busy people and they are inundated with submissions. To be accepted, your work has to be as close to perfect as you can make it.

 Don’t do as I did and keep polishing your opening chapters – write the full book and only then worry about making it shine – all of it.

Do your homework – don’t submit to agents or publishers who aren’t already handling work in your genre. No matter how brilliant your novel might be, no one is going to make an exception for you unless you are already a household name.

  Trish: Had you ever considered self-publishing?

 Lorraine: Only very briefly. Although I admire any writer who decides to go it alone, I knew this wasn’t the right path for me to take. I don’t have the skills required to format a book so that it looks professionally produced – and I don’t have the time needed to acquire those skills. I also wanted the services of a professional editor. I have seen too many self-published books that are crying out for a red pen to lift them from mediocre to the next level. I am a firm believer in a writer not being able to see their own flaws, even when they can spot those same mistakes in the work of others.

Trish: You have many irons in the fire: you write in multiple genres, run competitions, courses and offer critiquing services. The received wisdom is to develop a platform by becoming well known for one thing. Is this a counter-strategy for you, to be out on all fronts?

 Lorraine: No, I had no definite strategy at all. My repertoire is a bit like Topsy, it just grew! When I started out, all I wanted to do was write short stories and had quite a bit of success with various weekly magazines. I became a humour columnist almost by accident (first for Living France, then Spanish Magazine and now Writing Magazine). I used to write the occasional article showing the funny side of living in France and the editor at that time, Lucy-Jane Cypher, offered me a regular column.

 From that point on, I concentrated on the non-fiction side of writing because it provided an income I could rely on (not as easy to achieve with fiction). Maureen Vincent-Northam, a good writing friend, and I were chatting one day about how difficult it was for beginner writers to find all the information they needed and what a pity it was that there wasn’t a book covering this – which led to our writing The Writer’s ABC Checklist.

 In the meantime, I wrote a children’s book for my own enjoyment, but that too took on a life of its own and led to me being taken on by a specialist children’s agent.

 However, I never forgot my first love, which was writing short fiction and still wrote the odd piece of flash, but when I looked around for a competition to enter, none of them at that time offered decent prize money – so I decided to start my own and Flash 500 was born. It’s now in its third year and going from strength to strength. A year ago I added a humour verse category (another love of mine as I have won competitions in that category).

 I started offering critiques on the flash fiction entries because I could see that many writers hadn’t quite grasped the concept of what constituted flash fiction. The private critique service grew from there due to word of mouth, as I started getting emails from writers asking if I would critique longer works.

 So, from a business point of view, as opposed to a writer’s one, there were gaps in the market that I felt I could fill: The Writer’s ABC Checklist, the competitions and the critique service.

 Bad Moon Rising and the children’s novels were written in between all my other activities.

Trish: From your answers, I know you’ll be working on something new already?

 Lorraine: My publisher has asked for the second in the crime series and I am in the process of finishing another children’s novel. I also have a work of literary fiction, which has been in progress for so long that I think I might be in my dotage before I even complete the first draft.

 Trish: Well, I feel lucky to have caught you. Anyone who thought a writer’s life was a leisured one now knows different. Thank you very much, Lorraine, for putting aside the time to share all this with us. And I wish you every success with Bad Moon Rising.

 "Bad Moon Rising"Lorraine: It’s been a pleasure. Thank you, Trish, for inviting me to spend time in your lovely tree house.

 

 

 

 

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Lucky 7: seven lines from new works

I have been double tagged by two lovely writers, Tonya, on Twitter as @tmycann, and Dionne, @DionneLister. Lucky 7 is just a bit of ‘blog fun’ for authors. My first time to be tagged, so let’s hope I’ve done this right.

The instructions are:

  • Go to page 7 or 77 in your current manuscript
  • Go to line 7
  • Post on your blog the next 7 lines, or sentences, as they are – no cheating
  • Tag 7 other authors to do the same

Here are my 7 lines worth

At the moment I am writing travel books for the epublisher, Collca and there are two on the go. With ebooks, page numbers are difficult because it is all in ‘locations’, so the first extract, at location 7 x 7, is from a recent release, Masks of the Moryons: Easter week in Mogpog (more details from http://collca.com/motm )

“The priest is standing behind the altar. As he raises his arms and his voice for the Gloria, the moment of the Resurrection, Longinus leaps forward and shouts, “Buhay na ang Dios!” – “Christ Lives” – breaking his spear in three pieces to symbolise his final conversion.

Suddenly a confused scuffle breaks out around him as other Moryons try to get a piece of the broken spear – a powerful talisman – and for a moment he is on the floor with others on top of him like a rugby scrum. He breaks free, pelts down the aisle and out of the church to disappear into the darkness, swiftly pursued by other Moryons. The Roman soldiers have begun the habulan – the hunt to find and silence Longinus.”

This happens in San Isidro parish church in Mogpog on Easter Saturday. The next day, the week of re-enactments reaches a climax when Longinus, still in his fabulous mask and costume, is chased through the streets and up scaffolding, finally to be captured and executed in the town plaza.

The second extract is from  Journey in Bhutan: Himalayan trek in the Kingdom of the Thunder Dragon, which was released on April 20 : http://collca.com/jib 

“I’m curious to know whether the Immaculate Blonde keeps a journal, but she has gone for a walk, and I don’t quite have the hard neck to ask Caroline if her mutually reluctant room-mate writes in the evenings.

The conversation is so sad I get up to walk along the river and paddle in its sparkly cold water – hoping I’m not contaminating too many mantras. I would have selected a small white stone to keep, but Ngawang told me ages ago, when I was looking for one on the trek, that stones are sacred in Bhutan: they may be the habitats of deities. I do not want an angry, disorientated deity in my luggage.”

This was in the ancient town of Punakha, a picnic by the river on our last day in Bhutan. That afternoon, Tsering, the hotel receptionist, showed me how to wear the kira, the traditional Bhutanese dress. I wore it that evening.

The next seven

And now I have to tag 7 other authors (this may be where I lose some friends!) There are so many wonderful writers out there, I’ve tried to choose a wide range of genre:

  1. Lorraine Mace  @lomace
  2. Mathew J. Lyons  @MathewJLyons
  3. Terre Britton  @TerreBritton
  4. Stavros Halvatzis  @SHalvatzis
  5. Jane Rusbridge  @JaneRusbridge
  6. Sue Uden  @SCUPPERED
  7. D. J. Kirkby  @djkirkby

As you see, they are all my Tweeps, so now I’d better warn them.

 

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My Six Favourite Writing Competitions

Competitions are a way to develop your skills as well as a source of inspiration.

Plenty to Choose From

There are masses of writing competitions; from the questionable ‘ads’ asking for entry fees but not mentioning judges or prizes, to the internationally prestigious big winnings like The Bridport Prize. This attracts thousands of established writers worldwide; all most of us are likely to gain is the thrill of addressing the envelope with our entries quivering inside.

But the middle ground provides plenty of contests offered by reputable organisations up front with details of past winners, current judges, and reasonable prize money without profiteering on entry fees. And it’s essential to research previous winning stories and judges to get the tenor of the competition – it’s a waste of time to submit a tale of fluttering romantic delights if they want the pounding heart of darkness.

More to gain than prize money

Three other criteria I use to select a favourite competition are that it:

* runs several times a year; this gives me more opportunities to improve my story writing, and I don’t have to wait a whole year to be luckier next time.

* offers optional critiques; these are a real treasure and usually at excellent rates. I check it is not just a tick-list but an adequate critique that gives me plenty to work on. Very few competitions offer this service.

* publishes winning and short-listed stories as well as awarding cash prizes. I’m old fashioned enough to prefer print anthologies or magazines, something to prop against the milk jug in the morning, but if other criteria are met, I’ll go with the online version.

My top six competitions

(1) Flash fiction is fast becoming a genre in its own right. The Flash500 on-line competition was started in 2010 and has become extremely popular, receiving several hundred entries from 40 or more countries for each contest. It runs quarterly with a different judge each time. Optional individual critiques cost £10 (about $NZ20). Lorraine Mace’s eagle-eyed critique includes a full-page feedback on plot, characters, structure etc, and detailed editorial comments using Word’s ‘track changes’ programme. The most thorough entry critique I have found.

Writing a complete story in just 500 words stretches your powers of imagery and precision. Why not take up the challenge? Full details on www.flash500.com

Flash500 publishes winning stories and judge’s reports on its own web site and in the ezine Words With Jam – the best-kept media secret; subscribe online, it’s absolutely free and crammed to the margins with tips, humour and inside stories on writing and writers (www.wordswithjam.co.uk ).  

(2) Writer’s Forum is a UK, monthly quality magazine for writers of all genre, fiction, non-fiction, and poetry. It is available on subscription or in newsagents; I even saw one recently on the shelf in the Far North of New Zealand, so it can’t be hard to find. They have a monthly competition for short stories of any genre from 1000-3000 words; an optional full-page critique costs £5. This is exceptional value for a constructive, individual verdict from the bench.

The magazine publishes three winners in the next issue with a detailed write-up by judge, Sue Moorcroft. These stories and her comments are a rich source of critical insights on storytelling. Entry is by snail-mail or on-line, and is continuous – if a story is too late for one issue it’s carried through to the next, no sweating over deadlines. Further details are on their website www.writers-forum.com

(3) The Global Short Story Competition, run by Certys Ltd in the north of England, is a truly global contest seeking new, unpublished writers from every corner of the world. A search strongly supported by their main sponsor, the ‘nearly everywhere’ Bill Bryson.

They don’t offer critiques or publication, but each month winners receive cash prizes and their winning stories compete for the annual prize award. They accept submissions at any time during the year, by snail-mail or online. Stories must be less than 2000 words. For more, click on www.globalshortstories.net

(4) The Writing Spirit Award is offered by Dublin based Writing4all online writers group. They welcome submissions of short stories up to 4000 words in any genre, from all nationalities. The competition accepts entries in each of four rounds – short listed stories from each round compete for the final annual award.

Although there is no critique service, this is a free-membership writing group site offering mutual feedback, online courses, resources, and comprehensive competition listings, all of which can be accessed at  www.writing4all.ie

(5) Cinnamon Press, an independent small publisher in the UK, runs two short story competitions each year for stories of 2000-4000 words in any genre, by writers anywhere. As well as awarding cash prizes, they publish the winning stories and top runners up in an anthology; the entry fee includes a copy of this publication. Their website is www.cinnamonpress.com

Finishing your first novel? They also run a novel/novella competition; first prize includes publication, and four runners up receive a full appraisal of their work.

(6) Biscuit Publishing, another small literary publisher, founded in 2000 by the Lister family, runs both flash and short story competitions each year. Stories can be from 1000-5000 words, useful for those longer stories sometimes hard to place.

The first prize includes publication of your own short story collection or a novella – a fantastic prize for a short story. The top ten entries, as well as receiving cash prizes, are published in the winners’ anthology.

For winning stories and judges comments click on www.biscuitpublishing.com

The denouement

You never know where a short story competition might lead. When award winning author, Julian Barnes, entered a Times ghost story competition in 1974, his winning entry was picked up by Jonathon Cape and became his first novel, Metroland.

But for your story to win it must reach the judge; not be binned by one of the sheriffs because it doesn’t comply with the rules. One of the commonest reasons for disqualifying a story is exceeding the word count. Magazine fiction editors normally allow up to 50 words over their word count guidelines – they will edit the story anyway. Competitions don’t.

I asked Lorraine Mace about this, she said, “The story would be disqualified even if it was a single word over the allotted count. It’s a question of fairness to all entrants. The rules are there to ensure that everyone is competing on equal terms.” So check the word count carefully. With Flash 500 the word count excludes the title: in other competitions it might not.

Another regular transgression Lorraine pointed out was authors putting their names on the manuscript. Most writing competitions are judged anonymously – again, for fairness. If an author can be identified on the manuscript, it doesn’t get passed to the judge.

Finally, a quote from Sue Moorcroft, commenting on the three winning stories in the February 2011 edition of Writers Forum: “They’re beautifully written, making them effortless to read. To achieve effortlessness takes a lot of effort! To combine it with the storyteller’s talent of keeping revelations to the finale is a winning combination.”

If you feel inspired to try some of these competitions and stretch your talent, 2012 could be your winning year. Good Luck!

(This is an updated edition of an article originally written for the NZ Writers College website in March 2011).

 

 

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